... Ok? PEdophilia is what best describes this. I respect one opinion, but pedopihilia is something i am not ok with.

1/10
no medals awarded.

Whoa! I loved this story. Very love interesting. Please tell me there's a second part!? What happens to K' and Kula next?!

I'm a big fan of KOF, I think your story was pretty badass. barly any spelling errors. good plotting. the only thing I advise is that you be more detailed with the setting for K's...humping and hugging. lol

with much love, monkey


P.S: hopfully this isn't the last of your work I expect great things from you.

This was terrible. A lot of KOF writers at this site don't even try and it's fanfics like these that makes the KOF category crap. I support the K' x Kula couple but I am annoyed you screwed up what could of been a great lemon had you put more effort into this. Get a beta-reader.

Nice.
So random yet... so satisfying. :x

Uh huh...This fic is slightly sick since you made it look like K' and Kula knew what they we're doing and there vey OC here...but it's still K' and Kula some faving it. And i undertsand this your first fic..You'll imporve in time..wth am i saying? Im still a noob here who's a wannabe fanfic writer! Oh well..I've always wondered about a K' and Kula lemon but i never had the guts to write one..so...write more ^^;...or more fic on K' and Kula and I'd like to see if you improve! Good Luck

Holyshitohmygodwhatthefukbbq... This fic leaves me speechless...
Nevertheless, good work. :D

WHAT?!? You actually posted THIS?! I'm very surprised, in fact, my eyes bugged out when I first saw this because it was very familiar!
*pauses for breath*
Anyway, this is very well-written, albeit a few grammatical errors, but it's a common fault in everybody, including me. ^_^
I never thought you'd actually post this, Ni...er, Shinigami-kun. You sure surprised me.

Note to the Generation-A: Hey guys, this is the friend I've been telling you about a long time ago. And THIS is the fic I was telling you. Liked it, huh, Air Jay-san? :3
And he's got another K'/Kula fic, except it's not a lemon. It's a fic made upon my request. Shinigami-kun aims to please, right, Shinigami-kun? :3

Well, ta-ta!

Air Jay: AU I love this fic, JUST LOVE IT!

Alandra: SHUT UP!

Maliska: but what happen to Diana?, normaly she is the one who takes care of Kula.

Sunny: and Whip and Maxima... HA HA HA

Ramon: your fic is just wild, keep it up!