Very very nice. I always did love your stories. You have a great way with words and the story comes together very nicely. I love Cleo and Orphen together. They are so totally kawaii. I can't wait for any updates that you do. I am like a kid in a candy store when I see a story from you. Very very nice. I loved the whole scene at the hotsprings. I would love to see another scene added to this one to show where they go from here. Grins

tats such a sweet fic

Great job! I think this is one of my fav fanfics here. :) Write more!

GREAT story, I loved it! You did an excellent job on writing this fic, I can tell you put a lot of effort into making it as great as it is. Very well written, too. ^_^

Aw! This was cute! ^^ I like.
My fav. part was what Orphen said in the end. =D

I loved it. Can't wait for the sequel!!

It's me again! I really hope you do write a sequel! I think it'd be interesting to see how Orphen would react if Cleo told him what she was dreaming about...heh. *smile!* Bye! -Celesta

This is a really well-written fic. I am not exactly familiar with Orphen, but you have a great, actually comprenhensible style, and you manage to stick bits of humor in there as well.
Brava. Please keep writing!
Hayley

I'm not a one-shot person--hell, I'll be honest--I Hate one-shot's with a capital "H" but with that said--I love this little story, and I mean really love it! It got past my hatred of one-shots which is an amazing accomplishment. Congrats!

I had so many stomach flips while reading Orphen's words and actions; it even had my heart pounding.

Maybe I'm overly emotional right now, but I doubt that's it. I think it's because you are an amazing writer and it shows when you can send little jolts of pain as my stomach flips in and out--and probably even sideways!

“Cleo! Don’t do this! Fight damn it! I can’t fix this! No magic can!” That's where the stomach flips started, and we're at their worst. Something about the characterization of Orphen really added to the dramatic effect of that sentence-- I don't know what it is, but it was great!

I'm blabbering now, but I really thought you deserved a plethora of comments for your work.

Good luck in your future writing, and keep up the great Cleao/Orphen!

Ha, can't believe I just discovered this today. Cute, very cute.

sweet story!
it really shows orphens character (he worries about his friends but can't (or won't) show his feelings!)
the part when cleo thought she was dreaming was really good written!

As always, Love your Work!

^_^ Now that I've watched the series through twice, I can read ficcage. Lovely ficcage... :D

So, yay for the lime! Boo on Orphen for having only made the move in her dream *kicks him*. Great characterization, good dialogue. I enjoyed this! :D

Love, Rose

Great story ^_^ It would be great if you wrote a sequel, but I also like the story as it is.

Pink Sparkle

^^Nice fic; I love Orphen/Cleo...and, you actually knew HOW CPR works!! ^^; Most people don't think about the ribs needing to be broken...