 xxbeni.music 2008-03-15 . chapter 12xD Tag. With Shino-kun. Awesome^^
Lovely work!
-Gabs. |
 serenitatis417 2007-11-27 . chapter 26Haha, I quite liked this one!
It was very well written, quite smooth.
The interaction between Sasuke and Tenten at the end was quite cute. Good job!
Will be looking forward to more of DEB! :] |
 Yo 2007-08-09 . chapter 24 Hmm, a much darker, and realistic, look at things - and finally a polygamous pairing that utilizes males. Too often do these harems objectify or belittle females... It gets old quite quickly, wouldn't you agree? Especially as with most stories, only a -very- few are any good... I am amazed by your ingenuity in designing "Operation Phoenix" (or at least applying it to this); I wonder if such an idea has ever been considered by Kishimoto. |
 i.don'tMiSS 2007-08-07 . chapter 24Wonderful! Wow...that's all I could say... |
 Yo 2007-07-13 . chapter 23 Very nice; makes me yearn for more of the illustrious Team 9... Curse you Kishimoto!
I look forward to next month's! |
 serenitatis417 2007-07-11 . chapter 23Well, this perspective of their first year together is quite good. Subtle NejiTen, but kinda different because they seem to clash, instead of Tenten being rather submissive.
Good job!
Plz update soon! |
 ladypunz 2007-07-09 . chapter 23I liked this one a lot. Good job. I like how Tenten's barely starting out on a team and you already referred to her as a "goddess" |
 sasukekun'sgirl16 2007-06-30 . chapter 22Yeah, Gaara and Tenten! You made so happy! I absolutely love your stories! Thank you so much.
I do have a question though. I am not particularly fond of Kibaten, nor do I ship it, but do you do stories for them too? I was just wondering what you thought of other Tenten pairings. Thanks again! |
 Yo 2007-06-11 . chapter 1 Er, "I hope you update soon!" is rather pointless since this is a monthly theme thing, eh? Well, then: I hope your next theme continues the magnificence! (Does that even make sense?) |
 Yo 2007-06-11 . chapter 22 Very beautiful. I enjoyed how you characterized everyone and the discovery Tenten made. A lovely spark of hope for Gaara. Gaara should be comforted that he has two dedicated people to ensure he heals... Hopefully Tenten will not gain eye rings as well.
I hope you update soon! |
 red lilies 2007-06-09 . chapter 22Oh, I do love Gaara and Tenten. I really liked this chapter, the way you wrote Gaara slipping back and Tenten trying to keep him sane, was well done. I liked the touch about Gaara recognizing charka signatures. The ending was hopeful and at the same time sadding, asuming he doesn't make it. I cannot wait for next month. Go team spirit. |
 Lorelai 2007-05-13 . chapter 18 First of all, I just love this whole series of one shots. I've been such a terrible reader not reviewing to all of them. Sorry about that. But I really liked this one. I've never seen a story with Tenten being the granddaughter of the third Hokage. I like that idea. And I really loved this whole one shot right here because it was really emotional and it was a story within a story, an idea that entertains me. So, sorry about not reviewing except for this one, they have all been delightful stories and thank you for taking time to write! I'm really enjoying your stories! |
 serenitatis417 2007-05-11 . chapter 21Hello. Sorry I haven't had time to read the last three chaps.
Hmm... mostly somehow involves Itachi.
They're pretty good!!
Although Tenten with Itachi... hmm, not exactly a good pairing for me. I'm more of a ItaHina person. x]
Hehe, please continue!! |
 red lilies 2007-05-06 . chapter 21Can't say I liked it as much as last months, but I seem to have a thing for the sad ones. It was still great. The whole time I was wondering if it was a add on the Feb's, and if you would add more. You deffently make me like crack Tenten parings more each chapter. I can't wait for mext months. |
 ButaLove 2007-05-06 . chapter 21I agree. You should continue this plot...The ItatenSasu. I read this in your livejournal! And I found the older one from February too. They're both great. Update soon! |