just... pure LOVE! it's awesome

very good i love it
it is so good i love how you made him move
it was very good
keep on writing

i know this is a little late, but the reaction that i had to this story was really a "aw! That's SO cute!" and a "he!"
^_^

it was so adorable!.

wow, that was great.expecting more.

WOW!
fantastic Grissom!

Beautiful!

Yee haw! Gris went for it-and Sara met him halfway!

I love the way this matched the characters-
believable and full of hope! Thanks!

Lynn, since you've requested a review, I'd like to oblige and leave you some really awesome life/story-changing review. Unfortunately, I can't think of anything particularly helpful to say. But it was a very cute story and I liked that you had Grissom being kind of 'what the Hell' without being '** it'
A kiss on the cheek was way more believeable than a kiss on the mouth. Also, I liked that you had Grissom saying 'please don't be afraid of me' it felt very Grissom-ish. I mean, sometimes someone can write something and the words are completely Grissom-y, but the delivery just doesn't seem right. Something - I can't quite put my finger on it - but something about that delivery just felt right.
Please be proud of yourself. This was a well-written story and I'm definitlely looking forward to more work from you.

Wow . I can actually honestly believe this as an episode of CSI (minus the last two lines) . Because it isn't all hot and sweaty, ya know ? 'Cause their are alot of GSR fanfictions that go the OOC way . But this is just right . Go you !

Very sweet, gentle and touching...How I wish they could communicate this well on the show!

Very cute!

That was very cute and a perfect companion to "Merry Christmas, Sara". Happy New Year to you.

I really enjoyed this story, I especially liked the countdown and Grissom asking Sara not to be afraid. A nice flowing story.

Aw you Lynnwoman, very lovely indeed. Very good for a oneshot, I needed that... fluff, I mean :) Is everyone getting such fic btw? *smiles*

Andy

Wonderful! Happy New Year...all GSR lovers!