i love 009 and003 fanficts there my faverat cople.

way too short,not enought romantic tension build up

You should definately continue this. It has alot os potential (In my opinion anyway.lol) Keep up the good work

I think you should defenetaly go on i would most enjoy some fluffyness.

I LOVED IT!

oh, please write more!
im totally begging u! LOL!
anyways, i thought it was pretty good but it could have been a bit more um, whats the word im looking for? explosive. u should have put a fight in at the start to suck the reader in
all in all, its a good story
hearts and hugs
miss courtney

Go on!! lol It'll work either way. Do what you think is best for it as a writer.

-Rw77

a dificult decision...

i would like that you continue, but it still is a good job!

its cute and good for this season...

really good work... :)

Me Thinkth You should continue thy story, Pravite (sp?).

yAy! finally 009x003 fluff!

:D good story! But, only one thing...you skipped a few words in sentences, so if you want, I can be your beta and proof your work if you want!

Just an idea!

Otherwise great story!

This was a really cute story! I liked it!