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Erin Penright 2008-06-17 ch 12, anon.	abuseThat was not bad at all. In fact, it was wonderful. The only thing you need to do is get yourself somebody to edit your work. There are many punctuation as well as a couple spelling errors. Other then that, it was a fic well done. Keep up the good work!
Hades950 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuseby the by... this was the first story i read that got me hooked onto your work, i absolutly LOVE IT very from romantic, i write lot of poetry and this story inspired a poem i wrote that i'm working on getting published. please don't give up your writing =( i love it, keep it up!!
xXxUnReQuitEdxXx 2008-02-08 ch 12,	abuseOne of the best stories under Avatar! Loving
WritersBlock17 2007-11-28 ch 3,	abuseOk, I know that it's completed and all, but I really need to get this off my chest... The story, the plot, and the whole heartbreak of it all is great, it's astounding, and every minute I want to cry... But everytime (so far) that Katara and Zuko have argued, he has mentioned somethings that would earn him a good couple hits. And yet, most of them were ignored. With the arguements you make it SEEM like Katara is losing to them on purpose and that she is ignoring certain words and phrases on purpose... Take it from an international debater when I say that the verbal fights are unfair... An example would be: //"There's plenty of other women better than me!” Katara protested, “What could I ever do for you?” “Actually, nothing could be farther from the truth. Believe me I tried that, they do not do you justice. Every time I had a woman brought to me I only got frustrated. None of them lasted until morning!-"// Now... when I read her reply it seemed that she did not bother to point out how unfair it was for it to be ok for him to bed numerous women while she was being punished for staying with only one man... There are others, but I'm far too lazy to list them all out... I know you're finished with the story, and I apologize for this troublesome complaint, but the arguements really send me into confusion... Questions like: Why didn't she argue against this? Why isn't he apologizing for this? and Blah, blah, blah, blah ,blah... I'm sorry for my bits of critism, and I hope it doesn't come back to bite me in the rear, but I'm just trying to help out a bit... Thanks for reading! And thanks for writing!
Pavati 2007-11-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseignore the awful spammer. this is such a great story.
dantebascoluver 2007-10-31 ch 11,	abuseI have only read your trilogy so far, but I love it. Zuko is always in character, and Katara too. I wish that this would happen in the show.
dantebascoluver 2007-10-30 ch 12,	abuseHi spleefmistress! Just wanted to say... good job. I haven't read this in a long time. In fact, I read my first ever Zutara story from you, so you made me into the fan I am today I guess. I love the way you wrote this! It's so beautiful! I also like your Hades/Persephone one. You write great stories with out making anyone out of character! Rock on!
Avatargirl92 2007-08-11 ch 12,	abuseI LIKE THEM BOTH! do i have to choose? :( lol loved it!
Pavati 2007-07-03 ch 12, anon.	abuseThe baby thing was so cute
Edward'sBringingSexyBack 2007-07-02 ch 2,	abuseTHis story is so well written. i love it. Keep writing. ZH
Dragon Jadefire 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseUm...you made a typeo. The second to the last line says, I'm CONING for you. Don't you mean COMING?
sun 2007-02-24 ch 12, anon.	abuseThis is oneof my favorites fics but, what happento Aang was so sad.
J 2007-01-09 ch 5, anon.	abuseOK, you just spent two chapters where the dialogue whas pretty much the same thing over and over again. The minute there was a break through in this argument you skipped right back to the beginning. It's gotten insanely tedious and frustrating. I wouldn't mention it, except repitition seems to be something of a pattern in your works. If it's important, by all means have the characters say it twice in new and novel ways. But be aware of how much you're repeating the same things over and over in your dialogue. Other than that, I love this AU. It is just as good, if not better than the original, and I bow before your mad plotting skills.
Badgrl74 2006-11-13 ch 12,	abusePerfect ending to a perfect story!
smartcheer917 2006-10-16 ch 12,	abusei read this over on fichaven. its saved on my computer, can't remember why i did that though, but i do remember that it was really well written and it sucked me right into a trance. my lil sibs' were haveing a screaming fight and i didn't even notice till i was done. THATS POWERFUL CRAP I TELL YOU, SHE BROWK THE FREAKING WINDOW!.

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