*blink* Woah... Really good. But Suboshi's peace... You know, you feel sorry for him. Because any way you look at it, he's a kid, and he's only trying to do what he thinks is right. Even if it isn't, he believes it is. I really liked this turn on his thoughts

cool story! ^____^!! RELALY?!?!?/! YOU LIKE KODOMO NO OMOCHA (AKA Kodocha)?!!?!? YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! sorry, lately that's been one of my obsessed animes at the moment! ^^;. And most peopel have never ehard of it ebfore! .. i think my obsession with ti started 2 years ago in Taiwan and after i left taiwan, i forgot about it and then when i went to a graphic novels store and saw it translated... I IMMEDIATELY (okayokay... after i was in the middle of the second book..) RECOGNIZED IT! ^_________^!! then i became obsessed with it again. itz been a month. *Sigh* hehe... anyway... enough of me babbling about Kodocha! GREAT JOB SO FAR! ^^

Hey.. I think you portrayed Suboshi's poing of view very well. ^_^ He's the best character in the series..

That was...amusing...I enjoy reading Suboshi-death stuff...you'd be amazed. This is one of the better ones...not only does it make sense, you used CORRECT SPELLING AND PROPER ENGLISH GRAMMAR, which is more than I can say for some people.

(My god, my god, my god... Suboshi-chan... I want to go strangle Seiryuu and kill Yui. [Which I almost did in one of my fics] This was so touching, it stirred my heart.) >>>Suboshi Doll: And you are crying for what reason? (I'M NOT CRYING! *kicks Suboshi Doll away* :P!)

*cries* Oh... This is so beautiful and well-written. I have tears in the corners of my eyes. The last line. Oh God... Beautiful, Quicksilver.

::sobs::

Hm, very nice. Very nice indeed- so sad and depressing. ^_^ I love sad and depressing stuff no da..

THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST TWINS FICS I'VE EVER READ! In fact I'v read this several times and going to (if I ever get around to it) put you on my author alerts! Love it!

Wow...nice job. I really like this story...it made me really sad...good work!