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Reviews For: Walk A Little Straighter

kalan porter fan
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abusewow that was a great story. the ending was teriffic. write more soon.
Concealed
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abuseAw...:)
Daisyangel
2005-12-28
ch 1,
abuseThis was a very good story. I have two friends whose lives were affected because of an alcoholic and abusive parent. The first time I heard that song on my local radio station it brought tears to my eyes and I thought of my two friends. One of them has successfully moved away from her alcoholic mom. The other one said the exact same thing that Greg did because she is going to give birth to a little girl in January. She vowed not to do the same things her dad did to her. Sorry for the long review, all I really wanted to say in all of this is that you did an excellent job on this story.
CinnamonFaerie
2005-12-28
ch 1,
abuseLove this. Great song too.
charmed1818
2005-12-28
ch 1,
abuseAww! That was cute! Like I said before I like Plot Hippos better! :)
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