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deity of death1
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
Wow... I didn't read the author's notes so I was surprised to see Rikku as the antagonist here... O_O; I like the reference to roses... The Al Bhed phrases were a nice touch too, even though I had no clue what it meant. And Gippal... T_T; It was a sad ending.
frizz.i.am
2007-02-25 . chapter 1
OMG that is so deep...
Kocopo
2006-08-30 . chapter 1
oh wow...
definetly different from all the other Rikku/Gippal fics i've read, not that i'm complaining, a change is nice~
i like how you wrote it too~
having the flashback in different parts~
*favs*
kehcy
2006-08-22 . chapter 1
first of all, i'd like to say ...
that you're one of my favorite authors ^__^
i've read practically all your rikkuxgippal, except for djose days. bc it's the last one =[
ah i love your stories too ::^^:: they're not the normal cliches and i think your character development for rikku and gippal is rather impressive for someone who hasn't really played any of the games x]

good job! i was thinking about this story on my way to school and it was making me sad x__x but a good sad. like ..."gah that was such a good fanfic!" sad? xD ahems. anyway ...good job and good luck with the others ^__^
jo2thenah
2006-04-14 . chapter 1
wth?? who died?? did he kill her or did he commit suicide? lol anyways awesome story =) i love angsty gippal and mean rikku =)
kinokokichigai
2006-03-05 . chapter 1
*cackles* This was awesome. Great job for someone who hasn't played FFX-2.
Tee Vee
2006-02-27 . chapter 1
Yeah. I love this one too. He! He! He! There's really nothing left to say. Oh, and update your Three Stupid Words story. I read it! Okie-dokie. Bye! Smile!
Micayasha
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness. This is, hands-down, one of the best FFX-2 fics I have EVER read. It would be the best, but for the character death. =(

But it was INCREDIBLE. Normally I don't like when authors insert new characters into the story-often they just don't work. But Rilliana is so beautifully crafted that I hardly notice she is a new character. She just seems to... fit. Like a puzzle piece that you don't expect to work.

Fantastic job. But, er... for those of us who only know a little Al Bhed, like E muja oui, can you put translations at the bottom of the story?

Thanks! ^-^
Opaque.Heart
2006-01-17 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh. That was beautiful. I'm so close to crying right now. You are an amazing writer, you know that? I love the angst. I love it all. *bows down before you*
GAH! I can't even make sense! It was a great oneshot, even though you off'd Gippal.

Beautiful story, really.
~Secret~
Ananda Catastrophe
2006-01-15 . chapter 1
That was absolutely lovely. I like how dark and in-depth it was, how tastefully unique the idea of a Gippal suicide is. A pleasant change from lovey-dovey happy endings.
Super Sashimi
2006-01-01 . chapter 1
superbly sad... WTF did i just say? anyway.. i really loved your story
GiGgLyGaL
2005-12-31 . chapter 1
very angsty, but beautiful in it's own way. very well written. loved the story...

GG
Canada Eh
2005-12-30 . chapter 1
Amazing... Definetely a big change of pace from what you usually write, which makes all the more incredible. The way you introduced part by part the different events that unfolded makes it all the more interesting. And it's good to see that Rikku can be just as mean as Gippal at times. The way you ended it was superb, leaving the reader in a sort of suspense/awe. I give it a 10/10!

And congrats on getting a PS2 and the games! I'm sure you're really going to enjoy them, and it'll help you with the caracterisation and descriptions in your fics, not that you need any though :P You write perfectly as it is! But you really deserved the PS2 and games, so I say have a blast!!

Canada Eh

PS. Happy New Year!!
Selffie
2005-12-29 . chapter 1
YAY! RikkuxBaralai!

Oh... wait... wrong reaction?

Erm.. Oh yeah.. Uh..

That was so sad! v.v Poor Gippal!

...Better?
(Can't picture Rikku being that mean but oh wait! Yes I can...)
MissNeC
2005-12-29 . chapter 1
Wow! You are such a good writer, everything I've read of yours has been top quality and this is no exception! It's a completely different take on Rikku and Gippal's relationship to other fanfics but it works. It was so sad aswell! I hope Rikku feels eternally guilty when she finds out what Gippal did! :)
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