Amen... *sigh*

This is just beautiful! Congrats:D

"maybe it’s one of those things that can’t be labeled" Really love that statement:D
Loving this so far *aw*

This is an interesting piece. I like the way that it was written. ;)

I really liked this piece, specially the third chap (and not only because I have a soft spot for 3rd POV). And if I have to narrow down my favorite part (and that's a hard one, cause I just loved so many little things) I have to say it was the very last paragraph from the last chap. Though I know he, the character, didn't mean to, I felt included in that last remark:

"And like the good observers that we are, we'll watch every move, and pat ourselves on the back when it's all over, because we saw it when even they didn't."

Great writing, with amazing attention to the small details that really make up a well woven story. Speically liked the little comments after certain sentences, from the characters of course, trying (and in your case, succeding) to explain that which words have a hard time translating.

Wonderful story... Thank you!!

I like the way the rest of the squad. I also agree that people only think that they don't know they're in love. The ARE detectives. The two of them should have SOME idea

This is so good. Are you ever going to update it?

Perfection! I just so totally love this fic! I really enjoy stories that dwelve into the characters' minds, it shows how sensitive and astute the author is. Man.. I really love how you described each character's perspective. I especially enjoyed the little humour you inserted in Deakin's chapter about stones. Haha.. I can imagine easily him saying that. All in all, great job. I'm eagerly waiting for your update! ^-^

This is so very, very cute.

Excellent story and very original.

I. Love. This.

It's amazing. Such a cool idea, and the eloquence of the words is just perfect. You got into all their heads so well, and added all the little humourous bits in just the right places for that extra texture. The way you've described everything is great as well, I had mental images flashing in my head from different moments in various episodes where what you were describing happened. So cool to be able to do that. And I really like the idea where the two actually realize something between them, but no-one notices that they have. That's a cool thought, and really makes alot of sense if you can word it correctly. ;P

Sometimes language just isn't adequate enough for expressing ideas the right way.

Can't wait to see what comes next.

Pure BRILLIANCE. GOLD! GOLD I SAY!

This is really fabulous. I hope you continue. I really am nuts for this.

sheila

Lol, this chapter was so great. The rest of MCS sounds like the fans of the show. I loved it!

~Sara

what a cool story! i really loved the deakins perspective, especially at the end.

xox
ollie