Well, heh, heh, uh... didn't see that see that coming.

*moment of silence*

:) LOL

You've just made my day!

Awesome story, awesome ending!

nice job with with Mr. Herriman! man, i can't believe he would just trick her like that! Nice.

Hehe. Quite the humorous chapter you have here. I have to admit though, I was suprised to see that it was finished already. I certainly wasn't expecting that.

Oh and I can't *believe* Madame Foster already knew! Haha! That was *totally* unexpected!

Such a wicked story! Way to go, azuretears and Dude13!

Sorry I've not been reviewing for a while. These three chapters just snuck on up me out of nowhere. Anyway, great story. I almost felt chills reading the dog-hunting-rabbit part... plus there was a little comedy in there too, what with Frankie showing up to college 24 hours early! Lol. Sayonara for now, authors!

WE!

kaWAIEI!

so cute!

a boy/bunny friend and girl/girlfriend!

AIE!

*ahem* awesome. keep coming up with ideas to bring them together. it is TOTALLY AWESOME. so says me, Xaldin Horaz

Lol. So cute! They really were trying to choose their way of running the chapter, weren't they?

As usualy, your writing is par excellence, but I'll add that you're fluff is definately getting fluffier, lol.

Seriously. I think you just needed a couple that you could really let loose with (like F/H :)) and ahve some serious fun with.

Keep it up. It was just fabulous.

Yeah, I knw I helped write this story and all...but I couldn't help myself, I still think that you did a really, REALLY great job with this chapter! Excellent work!

Yep, I've gotta saw it...AW! That was so cute- I think this is my favorite chapter yet..But is Madame Foster ever going to learn about what happened? I'm suprised he's managed to keep it from her this long...Please update soon!

Very good chapter.

I liked the FOP reference... ha. If there's any fandom I know forwards and backwards, it's FOP (even though I don't write in it anymore). That and ASOUE, but I'm over that...

It still seemed different from your other works, for some reason... Maybe it's just me this time.

I loved it, though!

I'm also sorry... it seems like my reviews are getting less review-ish and more like a rant of how I have no time.

Awesome chapter, and update soon. Will Madame Foster find out?

STAY TUNED UNTIL NEXT WEEK'S CHAPTER OF HUBRIS, WHEN...

Very nice. A wonderfully touching couple of scenes between the granddaughter and grandmother.

But I especially like the end line.

“I never did get that phone call, you know.”

It has a certain amount of depth to it and between that and the hug for Mr. H, it was rather thought inducing.

I know this might not be an out and out F/H deal, but it's amazing how a couple of simple lines can have one thinking along that line.

Nicely done.

Quick review before I leave for play practice... Awesome job! I love the contrast of the styles you guys have... Unfortunately, I don't think I have my own style yet... Great chapter, and I feel so bad for everyone! Like I said, I'd have a longer, more detailed review, but my ride is literally outside waiting for me...

-Marty :-D

Quite the adventure in terror you've fed to us my dear.

You really tired to convey the essence of a life and death situation for Mr. Herriman and I think you did pretty darn well.

There were one or two spots that I had to wonder about, but on the whole, the drama and tension were high enough through out that I had to keep slowing myself down to make sure I wasn't missing any words. This is of course a good thing. If the reader feels compelled to read faster, it's usually because the tone of the story is implying they need to keep up with the level of action or suspense presented.

That's something that's not always easy to do, but I think you pulled it off nicely.

Great job.

Whew! Poor Mr. Herriman. I'm SO glad he got out of that situation! _ I like the fact that he has this close mental bond with his creator. Since they have been together for a long time, it only makes sense that it would be that strong. Great chapter!

What the hell? this doesn't suck you brilliant son of a... well never mind. that was AWESOME. You must keep going. understand? I still have 4 more exams coming up and i want to read the rest of the story as a reward for working so hard in school.

Very nice chapter. I feel terrible for Mr. H... and I have to say, the whole Frankie-Elvis song thing cracked me up, although I'm not positive it was supposed to... I have issues with laughing and crying at the wrong times...

Anyway, nice detail. Although, I'm not sure what it was, but this chapter seemed different from your usual writing style... maybe it's just me. Either way, it was a very rockin' chapter...

I'm really sorry- I have to type up an English assignment, or otherwise I'd comment more... But awesome job!

-Marty :-D

Man, keep going. it's a good story! I want to find out what happens! Oh Mr. Herriman! be careful! I have exams tomorrow, and i want to know what happens to you before then!