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| Darthme1011 2008-09-26 ch 40, | abusetear are rolling down my cheeks so very sad |
| SoNotEmo 2008-08-13 ch 42, | abuseWow, people wanted to kill you? I just wanted to yell at you. Oh, well, you've made me laugh, cry, and do basically everything in between. Chalk it down as a job well done. And, note, I reviewed and favorited. Somehow, alerting doesn't seem like a good idea. This was definitely worth the time I spent reading it, and, um, yeah, that basically covers everything. I would try to go deep and all "I'm smart" mode, but, it's 2:17 in the evening and I haven't eaten since yesterday at like seven PM. My stomach is making a symphony. Luckily, it isn't as sad as the one darling Amy wrote. XOXO, SoNotEmo |
| SoNotEmo 2008-08-13 ch 40, | abuseI cried reading that. I'm not afraid to admit it because I get caught up in characters. I laugh when they laugh, I feel angry, I go off. It is what I do. I loved how everyone was seeing her. They're minds showing them what they wanted to see, what they saw, and what they should. I liked this chapter... XOXO, SoNotEmo |
| SoNotEmo 2008-08-13 ch 39, | abuseUH! I HATE YOU. YOU ARE evil. Do you enjoy killing off like every fricken character? First it was the mama, then came the best friend, the the momof the best friend, the other female friend, House, the boyfriend, and now AMY! Uh. I saw it coming though. I saw the Chase/Amy angle coming. I saw the fish thing coming - don't ask. I saw Vogler's death coming. I saw the trial coming. I saw the House/Cameron coming. I saw the jackass of a first boyfriend for Amy coming. I saw the break-up between House and Anna coming. And I just hate when things are predictable in a way that hurts. When I started this review, I felt like I was about to cry, scream, and stab you at the same time. It's just not fair! I know life isn't fair, but damm this sucks. This is probably the most lines for random crap I've used in a while. Hmm, well, Cammie gonna be prego? I'm sensing an epilogue that shows the pain of those wounds yet captures the true acceptance and love that the doctors feel for each other in this tragic time... Sorry, I said that being really dramatic and I do believe I was mocking you and every story I've read recently with an ending like that. Um... I think that's it. XOXO, SoNotEmo P.S. Longest review... EVER! |
| Redneck626 2008-07-25 ch 22, | abuseWell, I decided to delurk myself and review. This story has an extremely good plot so far, and I'm going to continue on reading until the very end. Red. |
| K 2008-07-21 ch 42, anon. | abuseOverall a very good story. There are some very good points and some not so good points. Good Characters and some complex subplots. Bad the pacing and editing was way off. It didnt flow very well and made it more difficult to stay in the story. The good outweighed the bad with one exception. The whole Vogler sub plot was out of character and really did nothing to advance the story. Good job :) K |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 30, | abuseWait... aren't drugs and alchohol a lethal combination?!?!?! NO! House needs to live! For Amy and Cameron! Plus Cuddy needs someone to yell at and Wilson and Foreman need someone to argue with. And Chase needs someone who constantly makes sadistic remarks about his nationality. |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 29, | abuseI love Wuddy, its just so darn cute. :D Yesh! Catholics (or Christians) rock! |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 28, | abuseAH AH AH AH AH AH AH! *runs around screaming* was that the police?!?!?! or John?!?!?!?!? AH AH AH AH P.S. id prefer chemistry anyways. |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 27, | abuseUhm... it's either the bug in my eye is really whacking my eyes out or I think I read: Dr. Robert Foreman. Perhaps you put it by accident. its in one of the flashbacks where Foreman is hired. |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 26, | abuseYES!! she is saved! im going to badminton so... i'll read everything else tonight. |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 25, | abuseAH NO DONT KILL MARIE OR AMY! or house when he comes to the rescue... if he comes to the rescue.. |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 24, | abuseCOOLIO! I wish I had a psychic friend. Hah, Chase is lovesick! |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 23, | abuseOH MY GOSH> woah,. wasnt expecting that. Yes! ChaseOC! |
| truth standing on its toes 2008-04-24 ch 22, | abuseI like the part where Wilson said to AMy that house was using her and she said, i know but i want cake. i also like the part where house screams the fact that wilson asked cuddy out. |