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LilNinjaWolf
2009-07-28 . chapter 20
Man, that was one intense fic! Awesomely written too. Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time! :D
lady kae
2009-07-10 . chapter 16
aku is also the name of the badguy in samurai jack
Sciencegal
2008-10-07 . chapter 20
This story was one of my favorites! I'll have to read the sequel! I wonder what will happen...
Leo Oneal
2006-12-09 . chapter 1
Was it kari that wrote that note with Leo's name on it? Did she set him up? Well, anyways, I don't blame Leo for being cautious/ Please continue for this is a good story
Carayzee Anonymous
2006-09-30 . chapter 20
GAH! CURSE YOUR CLIFFHANGERS, TF! CURSE THEM! ;) ha-ha. Just kiddin'. Anywho, at long last, Leo's defeated the darkness and all can sort of go back to the semi-normalcy that is the turtles' life. Yay! ^_^' Yeah, I'm weird like that.

Anyway, fabulous story, TF. Can't wait for your future works to come to fruition!

I'm especially looking forward to the future chapters of "Mutamon!", cuz I'm an old Pokemon fan, too. I do watch the new ones, but it's so annoying that they've overhauled the voice actors for, like, half the cast! And for no reason in particular, as far as I can see. *stomps off grumbling about stupid TV producers and their fickle ways* I do, however, want to see "Mystery Dungeon". I missed the premier and now it's really buggin' me. Ah, well. Less about me, more about your fic. ^_^

Terrific job, TF. I love your writing style; very, very gripping. Can't wait for more stories from you! Catch ya later!
~Carayzee Anonymous
Pi90katana
2006-09-17 . chapter 20
AH!

A sequel? Are you TRYING to kill Leo?

Awesome job, Turtlefreak121! Can't wait for the second installment!

~Pi90katana
Mewfem
2006-09-14 . chapter 20
Great ending girl.
Lunar-ninja
2006-09-13 . chapter 20
OH EM GEE! The last chapter? (pouts) Aw, nuts...

(grins) That's so cute, Mikey going to Leo for comfort...

Oh dear...not again...XD I personally would be thrilled about a sequel, but do as you will, TF. Wonderful story, I loved it! Great job!

Ashite Imasu,
LN
BadCatGirl
2006-09-12 . chapter 20
It's called the last Big Boo.
Horror movies love just jumping in one last time to give you a sudden start.

...okay, no one actually calls it the last big boo but me, but I think that sums it up pretty well.

And that's the end of Yin!
But not of Aku...
Well, it's like they say, evil never dies...
And that's actually one I DIDN'T make up.

Okay, the review, the final review, and nothin' but the review.
At times it got a little confusing, but overall it was exciting and kept you guessing the whole way through. As always you had the characters down pat. Some of the speculation about Yin only managed to confuse me more, and of course the dream sequences midway through had me scratching my head at times, but I think that's because I'd forgotten what had happened in the last chapter.

So, is that your last evil Leo story? How about next time we all mix it up and make an evil Mikey story? Okay, I'm kidding there.

My final note on the story, my overall opinion?
You Rock, girlfriend!
I guess I can't rag on you about updating it anymore, can I? I'll have to satisfie myself with bugging you for updates on Secrets of the Past.
Bioniclefangirl
2006-09-12 . chapter 20
Oh... not again! Ah well if there's a sequel make it soon and congrats on it i loved this fic =1
The Burninator Named Trogdor
2006-09-12 . chapter 20
Good ending. Ya always have to leave it open! Keeps people guessing. Poor Leo... I can't imagine him having to sleep with a night light. That is some scary stuff!
Pi90katana
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
Okay, I'm reviewing 19, but here it says I;'m reviewing one.

19, not 1. Okay?

Awesome end to this chapter! The fight scene with Yin and Leo was great!

Good job! Please update soon!
Lunar-ninja
2006-09-02 . chapter 19
ACK! Don't die, TF!

(dances in her chair) Gah, I need to know what happened to Leo! PLEASE update soon!

Ashite Imasu,
LN
Carayzee Anonymous
2006-09-01 . chapter 19
Turtle Freak, I have but one thing to say: Wow. I've been reading this fic for a while now and I have to say it's only gotten better with each update. I have to admit, the "horror" genre listing had me a little worried at first (I don't read horror very often at all), but once I actually started reading, you had me hooked! Please forgive me for not reviewing earlier! Such a wondrously formulated story deserves far better praise than I can give in but one review. Anywho, I must reiterate, fabulously done! Bye for now!
~Carayzee Anonymous
Bioniclefangirl
2006-09-01 . chapter 19
Yin is no more... finally and at last no more... YAY! You must must must update soon I shall wait! And with popcorn and sodas! =1
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