I like this story! I hope you update real soon!

"Be my wife" what a hell is that! Well it's cute and totally not tradicional. Hope that Becka run away? Update Soon! And I like your drawings they are cute and gave me a idea of what they look like! Thanks

great chapter!

They are absolutley great drawings, they look so cute together I cannot wait to see the one with Elizabeth and Ben. Please update soon!

Great drawings, I think it would be cool to see the couples paired up together. It would be cute. Thanks for drawing them, and can't wait for the updates.

That was a big progress in the line of Elizabeth and Ben romance! YEAH! But now Becka is in trouble. Hope she stays alright and that you stop writing what is going to happen! OK? Update Soon!

I would like to see Elizabeth and Becka drawn out, just to get a visual. Great chapter

Another Update and Another Suprise! Becka and Jean already married! That's wonderful! Hope that Anne doesn't die because I don't what Gabriel to die! You know the drill! Update Soon!

great chapter with quick updates, nicely done!

WOW! Great update! I never read the other story but I hate the idea of Elizabeth being raped and pregnant. I hope you write fast so I can read it very soon! A Ben child would be great! And hope Becke stays ok! I hate Wilkins!

Hey that was a great chapter! Keep it up!! And I love how you keep Tavy in person.

WOW! Love it! Great update! And Becka and Jean already on the move and now Anne and Gabriel! Everything is going to it's right place! Update Soon! Love the double update made my day! It's 2:42 am and I'm thanking the gods for making me check my email one last time before I go to bed! lolololololololol

someone's jealous. Great chapter.

I love the way you write Ben/Elizabeth/Gabriel love triangle! I think that you are doing a great job! Update Soon!

P.S. Jean e Becka? Good idea!

Great! The Story is a new concept for me because I usually only read Tavington/OC fics! But this one is good! And I want Elizabeth e Ben together not Gabriel! But it will be great for Gabriel to stay alive and his wife too, after all we can change the story sometimes! Update Soon!