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| naoko 2007-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseperfect - so cute and also a little bit funny. I think it's rounded(i hope it' the right word) go on writing, i would like to read more SatXRisa from you |
| Bashful Jane 2007-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseAya-chan! That was very cute. There was a LOT of parenthesys, which was kinda annoying. The metaphors--oh, the metaphors! Ah, authors admiration is weird, I know. Fluff would've been nice. Dollie-kun! |
| DXM Junkie 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseFreaken awsome! I admire your skills!! I love it so much!! on the favorites list it goes... |
| Skavnema 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuse*laughs*kinda funny... |
| -boos- 2006-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse[ swoons ] [ faints ] [ awakes ] [ swoons again ] that was so cute! but i thought his response would've been, "i have now". like right after the kiss. please post more. |
| Alena S. Anigor 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseNot too OOC...and so sweet! XD At first I thought Satoshi was a bit OOC but since you mentioned they were in a relationship, it wasn't so hard to imagine Hiwatari-kun acting all mischievous...^_^ Good job, Aya-san! Please, update soon! |
| Wilted Paper Flowers 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL!! ^^ Yay! Fluff! Update soon! XD |
| Yachtzee 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know. Someone up there DOES love me. Just as I love your fiction. It is so sweet. I want a strawberry-topped-chocolate-cake-flavored kiss from Satoshi, but no..Risa gets him. Mm. But I'll just have to settle for strawberr-topped chocolate cake then, won't I? Wonderful "kiss" here, and keep writing these wonderful things. (Beautiful thought-lines.) |
| pnaixrose 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseHaven't heard from you in so long! :) This is to cute. Haha I liked how you portrayed Satoshi here. Great job! |
| MazdaKitsune 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseNo...it's cute, really! ^__^ |
| heka 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abusei DONT CARE if he's ooc. actually, he's slightly ooc, as in his thoughts, but overall he's still ic... lol i LIKES IT. woot. i shall never look at strawberries, chocolate cakes and everything else pink in general. oh goodness. my fren likes pink. dark: that cool guy can love? dont insult him. he's i quote 'one of the most lickable 14-year olds'. lol. i didnt say that! |
| greenlee 2005-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseheh , its nice |
| Outsane 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseHehe! So cute! XD |