:] you should definately write more! <3 i love it.

I rather liked the Kimbley/Martel part. Because nothing beats hot hate sex. And I'm glad I finally came across an author on this site who actually has some skills. Good job, I think I'll be checking out your other stories.

Hot. And possibly the most in-character fic I've ever read. Martel and Kimbley are dead on. And it makes complete sense for Greed to be bi, of course he would be into ALL the pleasures of the flesh.

I loved this story, you don't see Kim/Mar stories much. You should write more, your very good.

Jessica

I gotta say this was amazingly well written - I won't go into detail or anything - but I'll just say that this was great - well written as I said...awesome job ^^

Kato's No.1 Fan xx

Two of the best FMA ships in one

WAY TO GO

LOVED THE STORY

Das x

Nya-Ha! Awsomeness!

Awesome... Too awesome for words. You made them a pairing, but still kept them in character. My story is starting to edge off of character and slipping into how I would want them to act. But ah well, I'll just have to start a new one for that.
*claps*

Oh, that was so well written. I adore Martel, I'm glad to see such a good quality fanfiction about her.

Nicely done.

I think you handled this very well. Keeping the characters as IC as possible really helped make this situation believable. And though shes a minor character I've always like Martel and it nice to see something well writen staring her character.

Wow. This goes right up there with my favorites. I've never had any particular fascination with these characters, but this certainly sparked it. Well done.

for some reason I think that Kimbly Hughes and Greed all look alike, if you look closely you'll see that they all have that same smile

Oo... hot... verry hot... martel/kim... great man (err... woman?) GREAT!

~Nirvana Renegade Seiga, at ya service

Very intense! I have to admit, this was not what I expected, but I enjoyed the change. The portrayal of characters is very appropriate to the title. You really tapped into Martel, Kimbley and Greeds psyche and the descriptions were very detailed.