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slr2moons
2007-12-01 . chapter 1
I found your fic on a LeeSaku rec list, at des-butterfly dot livejournal dot com slash 63695 dot html, if you're curious. :)

I'm very glad I read your story!! It's so good to see someone write a Lee who is IC yet not horribly overdone with the boundless energy. I especially like how you mention his beloved Springtime of Youth without making it an event! You let him be himself. Yay!

I also like how you don't ignore Sakura's obsession with Sasuke, you show it and work it into the plot of your story. The way she lets him go when he returns to the village is very powerful. Particularly when you never reveal what she said to him. I'm especially impressed that you showed your female love interest is not a perfect princess. She even has SNOT. Wow. That's very brave of you! XD I genuinely like Sakura, so I'm very pleased to see her treated well and written IC.

Great ending, BTW. I love how you show Lee and Sakura have ended up together. Mentioning that Lee sometimes has to sleep on the couch is a nice touch, and keeps your story realistic. Becoming a couple does not equal eternal happiness and perfection! A relationship takes work and compromise to make it last. :)

Thanks for sharing this!
KatsyKat
2007-10-24 . chapter 1
Aww.. very sweet in deed. You may just make me a fan of this couple. Great job!
Illusion of the Mirror
2007-09-05 . chapter 1
So Sweet!
MidnightWhisper7
2007-06-29 . chapter 1
Lee x Sakura is cute and endearing in an inexplicable way. I like how this is made of little moments in the development of a relationship. The second scene was my favorite and I was glad that Sakura was able to leave Sasuke behind (although I've never much liked him to begin with).

Very enjoyable and touching and well-written.
EroSenninLuva
2006-11-06 . chapter 1
Wow..that was REALLY good...one of the most realistic depictions of a possible LeeSaku relationship...(Alot of them are just, Sakura makes Lee change his clothes and she falls in love you know?...So I was surprised by this, it was really sweet, good job :)-EroSenninLuva
InvaderWeb
2006-09-23 . chapter 1
Cute! I loved this!
Nik
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
Very nice... sweet but not syrupy... and just about the perfect length. I like it.
Illucida
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
cute
Kinomoto Neko
2006-06-07 . chapter 1
KAWAII! *huggles author and wipes away a real tear from her eye* So sweet...
Gennerator
2006-05-30 . chapter 1
This is a really, really great story, even if it is a one-shot. I especially love the way you portrayed Lee's view on Sakura; how he learned that she wasn't always what she appeared.
Great job overall.
(I can't believe this only has ten reviews! Well, eleven, counting this.)
Born-Of-Elven-Blood
2006-05-20 . chapter 1
*tears of joy* brilliant! *sniffle* beautiful and brilliant! thanks for posting that! I love this pairing! Well done!
jet777
2006-04-29 . chapter 1
This story was very touching ..it kinda reminded me of my B/F and I Now going on 4 years of dating.
arising
2006-02-23 . chapter 1
wonderful and very well-written... I really love how you wrote Lee and Sakura :D
ShortySC22
2006-02-18 . chapter 1
I love LeeSaku! This was an amazing little story!
Ryou Marik
2006-01-03 . chapter 1
o_o; Wowies, I liked it. n__n Pretty pretty... keep writing... o_o; I could only hope to write as pretty... bleh.. i'm too angsty for my own good x_x But anyways, great!! There are hardly any Saku-Lee...
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