I like this a lot I can't wait for you to post the next chapter.

Is this going to be updated sometime? It's a nice story and it should continue sometime. :)

This is so cute...

A relief to see this kind of peaceful fanfics after a load of...I'll just say 'disturbing' ones...

Hmm...I'm sad to hear that it's only going to be 3 chapters :(

But it was sweet. I would have like to have a bit more elaboration near the end...It seemed at bit abrupt to me...but I'm just weird like that. I like the consistent descriptions about Baralai in the beginning and near the middlish areas...For how serious the situation is, I like how you try to have Rikku's personality still in there.

I'm no good at reviews, so sorry about it...I'm anticipating the final chapter from you. Can't wait to see how it ends...

This next chapter was also very cute. Aw..._

I was wondering when you were going to do another one of these. Good thing I was just browsing through when Icam across this one and I gotta say, this was very cute! You seem to do a very good job at these little stories! _ Now you should try and write a longer story so that way, there's more to read! LOL! Anywayz, I'll be seeing ya around!

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That was really cute, even if I'm a bit biased with couples(Gippal/Rikku . my favorite...)

...I'd actually have like to see Paine in this situation...I'm curious to how she would handle it...

But your story was very cute! I really think this would be a nice multi chaptered fic...

Well done though! (and I don't agree with you, it isn't dull.)

Well, I'm going to stop rambling now. Sorry for the bad review...I'm not too good at them (I don't mean bad as in mean or anything...but if I am mean then go ahead and hit me...) I'm going to stop now, sorry for that...um...

Secret

Very interesting. I love Barikkus! I say it would be interesting to expand on this.

Spend a little more time editing. It sucks, and I hate doing it, but little things bug the crap out of me.

This has some real promise, if you continue it. Otherwise, its a nice little one-shot!

Yes! Another Rikku and Baralai fanfic! Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, by the way, I'm sorry for not updating here... But it's not my fault that something's wrong with this computer! :( Anyways, I'll be waiting, so update soon!

Wolf: Hehe. Babbling Rikku funny Sis. A fairly enjoyable fic considering I'm not interested in Final Fantasy X-2 at the moment. Fire Emblem fetish. Though you didn't mention the song so you didn't have to say anything about it in the author's note. And a few grammar errors but that's okay. .

DM: (blinks and turns to stack of papers) (Grins evilly and holds up arm) (flames shoot out to papers) BURN! BURN YOU MINIONS FROM TARTARUS! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!

LM: .; Uh. Hehe. Good job Mystic. And Demon and Angel...be nice!

Wolf: Later Sis...and review my fic!