holy effin shit that was awesome!! I LOVE U!! U R A GOD!

Good, cute, hot and short.

This was too short. Still, yummy.

wow! that was great!

Very cute and very O/O. Fly over the moon by the bloody-nose rocket. Awesome work.

This lemon was pretty good but I feel it could it could of been better. But overall you nailed their personlities and this was some great yuri.

omg that was... whoa! holy crap that was good. There are not the proper words in the english langue.

that was awesome I have no story right now but all to soon i will and i hope maybe someday I can make a lemon as good as yours thanks later

aw
love and sex all wrapped up in one well written package
good job on this ^_^

Honey, you have taken minutes away from my life that I can never get back.
I'm not sure if you a man or a woman but either way you don't know how to give or recieve pleasure properly. Study up on it beffore you write about it next time.

I suggest choose your words more carefully. Titts, esophagus, drool, and love hole were all words that killed the loving and sexual tone that you need for a decent fic.
I'm not flamming just trying to help you out.

IM me at Iceey05 if you want some ... support / help / more suggestions / anything.

If not I suggest you start cybering with different people and see what arouses you. Pay attention to words use and assembly.

that was an awsome story! well good day/night.

Despite the fact that they loved each other you hit the characters dead on. well written. - disturbedthoughts

over all pretty good and to the point, sounds like just a one shot to me so you did pretty good, the moaning/question asking during the sex scene was a bit weird to me it did flow...idk...but the story was done very well.

this fic is the shit. i would read this all the time. i give it a 9.7 out of ten.keep writing playa!

The descriptions were perfect, I'll tell you that. It was kickass.