omg this so good this is what should of happened!

What is it about me and starting stories that end in cliffhangers?
Nice story though, and I like the way your writing style echoes that of the Revenge of the Sith book.
Looking forward to seeing more soon :)

Wait!! did anakin kill hmself??! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I kinda hope that Padme finds out the sacrifice that he made for her.

Good.

PLEASE LET HER LIVE!! let Anakin save her!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i love it!! will they ever be a family though?? and Just out of Curiousity, where is Leia?? I hope you'll keep on writing the story, it's wonderful

HEY! So really really great story! I cannot wait to read more on this very different plot! Mind you this is the first fanfiction on starwars that i have ever read...and I am glad this was the one that i chose..its fantastic...something i am a lil' disappointed about...where on earth is Leia, in the second chapter (i think) you mentioned that Padme was gonna have twins...but since then there has been no mention of Leia...Luke is adorable by the way! I also of course love Anakin, though I wish Obi-wan was a little more buddy buddy, and they acted like bestfriends and brother-types and stuff...


lol anyways cant wait for more! :D

No Leia? I hope Padme will be okay.
You are so evil for leaving a cliffy like this.
Please update soon.

OMG story this is so sad.

Padme makes the ultimate sacrifices to save Anakin from the darkside and looks like it’s working so far. Now Anakin has taken her place and turned into the dutiful servant of the Republic instead. I’m glad Obi-Wan isn’t going to snitch on them.

This is great so far, please continue!

Awesome update!

Great story its sad but like it hope you update soon!

great story

Please update soon.

Please uptade - I want to know what happens next.