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Stroganoff
2009-11-25 . chapter 10
Wow, no updates in 4 months? I hope my review isn't for nothing. :<
Now to begin with, I read this story from start to finish in a
::very:: short ammount of time. Normally, I have to spread out fics
so my brain doesn't hurt from staring at my computer screen too much, but I really couldn't keep away from your story for long. Most Sess/Kag pairings seem SO unlikely I can hardly stand them, because, hey, they're a pretty unlikely pair. But you do such an amazing job of making their meeting and actual relationship seem plausible that I actually enjoy this story more so than the Inu/Kag fics I'm so used to reading. Please don't leave your work without an ending, I've read too many of those!
Good luck~
P.S. I really enjoy those quotes at the beginning of your chappies; they're food for thought. :]
ICE QUEEN ANALICE
2009-11-13 . chapter 2
omg i love the story its soo cool
Sweetz Sugerz Body
2009-11-03 . chapter 10
THIS STORY IS AWSEOME! You HAVE to continue!! I love it! And I love how you decided to make Kagome a part time mermaid! Please update A.S.A.H.P (As Soon As Humanly Possible)
Celeste
2009-10-26 . chapter 10
Finally you updated! FI-NA-LY! Jeez please dont scare me like anymore...
Malfoy's Kitten
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
love it
Saruko
2009-10-22 . chapter 10
God! You need to update! This is a really good fanfic, I want to see what inu will do when he finds out kag is a mirmaid!
KohanaChan
2009-10-15 . chapter 5
Aw, Moon and Stars part was a great thing to have. I have read many fics and not one had my interest like that selection did. ^^'
KohanaChan
2009-10-15 . chapter 2
Awws! I LOVED the idea of Kagome being a Mermaid Hime!

Y.Y
Sinistera of the Akatsuki
2009-10-12 . chapter 10
love it very much please update soon
Shauna
2009-09-29 . chapter 10
Hey,
Please continue the story I love it. You are an awesome writer keep up the good work. I LOVE IT!
SAzraf
2009-09-06 . chapter 10
Wow!! This is a great and unique story. I've never heard of another fanfic where Kagome was mermaid (or part mermaid) before! The mermaid theme reminds me of this awesome romance book about a mermaid/angel pairing - A Mermaid's Kiss by Joey W. Hill, though I guess the only common denominator are the mermaids :D I'm really enjoying reading this story. I hope you keep updating. Thanks for writing this awesome fic!!

P.S I also like the quotes you put in the beginning of each chapter. I know several authors do that but some of yours are pretty unique ones that I haven't heard before :D
Jacob-imprinted-on-me-hehe
2009-08-22 . chapter 10
OMg i love this fic! At first I was a bit iffy, I'm like mermaid? But the I started to read and I love it! Its awesome as! I hope you update soon :)
Stelina Miko Kitsune
2009-08-11 . chapter 10
HEY! I'M BACK! :P Sorry for a time I had too much story on story alert so everyday I got 10 to 20 fanfiction mails and sometimes I couldn't even read them all so I turned the alert off... Anyway : GOOD STORY, GOOD CHAPTER! I still love your story even more with the editing you've done and just by curiosity : what's the meaning behind the apple scent of Kagome? All I can think about is Eve & Adam but I don't think it's that symbolic... maybe my religious class got to me after all... hehe... Update son please! Love your story :P

*~Stelina Miko Kitsune~*
SayaHaji1648
2009-08-11 . chapter 10
Please update soon! XD
Whitecloud1
2009-08-10 . chapter 10
Just caught on to this cute little fiction, I like how Sesshoumaru, like all other creatures, begins to evolve when he feels something is truly at stake. Kagome is a catalyst for the changes. She too is evolving, which was brought on by Sesshoumaru. Well written and nicely done. I can't wait until Sesshoumaru decides upon his hobby--other than running. If he would just breakthrough that silly pride and try something with Kagome (the two-legged), as he is struggling to do, maybe he won't be too disappointed when Hanabi goes away. Though, he is beginning to fall for Kagome. =)
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