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Reviews for: Utai Tsutzuketa
Romancelover1321
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
Interesting. Can't wait for the next update.
hakusho14
2006-12-14 . chapter 1
Haha it was pretty good i hope u update soon cuz i wana see what happens in this story!! UPDATE SON!!;P
Smiles Fade. Music Plays.
2006-08-17 . chapter 1
this is a great story!
please update!
Mere Anarchy
2006-07-10 . chapter 1
Hm. . . interesting, as of yet. Update soon!
FF Please Delete Account
2006-06-25 . chapter 1
2 thumbs up! u rock! update soon!
Mangosplashies
2006-06-01 . chapter 1
Great story! i liked it so far! pleaz update soon!
CloeyMarie
2005-12-30 . chapter 1
I really liked this. Normally I stay clear of the fictions that feature them in a band but this one called out to me and I'm so happy that I did read it. You have excelent charectorization, lovely description, and it just flows along very nicely. Though I must say that the "...Obviously disturbed, perturbed, and any other words I'm too lazy to find that sound like that..." Made it seem less put together and professinal then this really is, there really wasn't a need to have another word that rhymed.
That was my only nit pick though. Other then that a wonderful job so please keep up the good work! -Cloey Marie-
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