"You can't, I can"/ Yep, definitely a friend of Jack's/"Elizabeth goes free"/Definitely Bootstrap's son. I like how you used those two specific lines to show the parallelism in Will's personality. It was VERY cool to see you comparing Will's nature to both elements of Jack's personality and the personality of his father...traits that are further explained in earlier chapters. MUY BIEN!

I liked this chapter a lot, you really know how to keep a conversation flowing.

Forever yours,

Danielle Jones
(Daughter of legendary, fearsome, Davy Jones.)

This is a wonderfully structured story. I enjoyed it a lot. Your choice of words are very particular. Since you love Barbossa just as much as I love Davy Jones, and Adventure in general, Check out my Story, Pirates of the Caribbean: A New Tale. Comment plz.

Otherwise, loved it! The flash backs are awesome!

Danielle Jones (Daughter of the legendary, fearsome, Davy Jones)

MUCH OF THIS IS PLAGERIZED AND ALTHOUGH YOUR TAKE ON CAPTIAN BARBOSSA IS INTERESTING I WOULD HAVE LIKE TO SEE YOU MAKE THIS YOUR OWN A LITTLE MORE... A LET DOWN FROM YOUR OTHER STORIES... SORRY MATE BUT THIS TIME I JUST AM NOT A FAN

Magnificent story. I'm going on to read the rest!

Draconous

Wow. That was just...wow. Amazing. I never thought about things like that. You should continue it...AFTER you see the secon one of course. That'll be interesting...

Really enjoyed this story, very well written and flashback sequences were excellent, it really fits in well with the movie and what might have happened. Write more soon!

Very good! Gives a different view on the whole movie, and clears up a few things.
Bye, Barbossa! It was nice to get inside your head, even if it proved to show just how much of an evil dude you are, er, were.

So this is a rather bittersweet chapter. Very well done, but I'm sad that it's the last for a while. Barbossa's death was almost... sad. Weird really. Very well written though. : ) See ya in 40 days!

Sorry - it's too early in the morning to be replying to you, Cap'n Barbossa, so I'll be speaking with the lady who is telling your tale!

I love the insight into Barbossa's life and the explanation of the curse - what a pity they did not include Bill in the first film , it would have been great.

Another great chapter! I like Bootstrap. Poor Raven. : ( and even Nathan. As much as I don't like him later I can't help but sympathize with him here. Great work!

Lol good chapter! I like Barbossa's comments about Will. They made me laugh. : )

Firstly, I must apologise if my name offends you, secondly that was a great chapter and I must say I enjoyed the repartee between you and Jack, Barbossa. Your thoughts when Will Turner shows up are especially amusing!

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see...
i still reveiwed...
great chappie...
and i agree.. you have improved...
you'vbe gone from a really good writter...
to a great writer...
anywho... can't wait for the next chappie!

This is interesting. Very interesting. I like bootstrap. Not sure why, but i do. So yes, keep going. Good chapter etc : )