well i liked it but i have to say, this chapter draged on... im hoping the next wont be so?

This was too adorable to put into words, so I'm not going to bother. I read the whole thing in one sitting because I couldn't tear myself away!

its good so yup

FINIS CAN SIT ON A CHAIR WITHOUT BRAKING IT? HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE?

I also have a reason for why Victoria turned out so nice, she was raised mostly by the sweet maid, Hidigarde, now the laughing thing, I don't know.

Victoria's probably used to Nell because Maudeline is even WORSE!

Instantly faved. The very first word of the first chapter, to the very last word, END, is just amazing. I nearly cried happy tears of how beatiful, heart-warming, and loving this story is. After reading this, I felt a very warm and comfortable feeling. Your story was absolutley incredible. If you plan to make a sequel, I can't wait to read it. Hope you make more of these! =D

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: love it! You're a very talanted writer, and at the moment I'm just a tad jealous. Whenever I try to write Corpse Bride, Victor is rediculously out of character. You, on the other hand, know them very well and they're never ooc! Love the girls, too, by the way. I loved every bit of this story, it was just...wow. That's all I can say. Very good job. Why does it have to be over?!

I really enjoyed it. This is nicely writen, and you stayed in character quite nicely. good job.

That story was so cute! i love how you wrote it. The mentions of Emily, without making Victor regret his choice, were so sweet. very very good.
KrisEleven~

"How terrible, he thought. And yet, oddly fantastic at the same time"
That was very funny. I really like this story, and i was going to wait and review when I got to the end, but I just *had* to compliment you on that line.
KrisEleven~

Your story made my day when I first read it. The characters are kept nicely in character, and it's such a lovely little story of Victor and Victoria's lives. I enjoy your writing very much.

... I nearly fell off my chair! Wow, you really had me going. I was expecting the worst and then... "It's a girl" Ha! That was great, I really like this story! :D
"Just for scaring me, I'm not paying your fee." Woot! Go Victor. :D :D

Aw!

Anne with an "E".
Love.

Beautiful. Absolutely perfect.

This,...story...was...GREAT! I loved it!