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| Sahara 2006-09-23 ch 2, anon. | abuse.o. Oh! An update! ^^ I really like this story! .w. Please update soon! |
| Cattitude 2006-09-18 ch 2,  | abuseDon't worry about confusing the characters. We all make mistakes (like I did with the S/M story). ^^ I've been thinking about watching PMK (so I can understand it better), but I'm not really sure if I want to. Anyway, you wrote the story in such a way that it was easy to follow, even though I know nothing about these characters. :) |
| Xyane 2006-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting fic! I like the AU setting you've put them in. Just picturing it is fun. And yes, gosh darn it, SusumuxAkesato do make a great pair. I'm suprised there aren't more fics with this pairring. Yours is actually the only fic I've read so far that has this pairing. Hope you update soon! |
| rustygirl 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! Please update soon! :) |
| Miss Informed 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThis fandom -does- need more good AUs, and I think that this is one. It's a great start and intriguing, too. I also like how you made Akesato a detective. That's something I wouldn't have thought to do. I can't wait to read the next chapter; it should prove to add to the mystery and AU-ish fun. (AUs -are- fun, which is why I can't seem to stop writing them!) |
| anaemicfaeries 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseYou're right, there aren't many good AU fics in PMK! And this looks like a really good one. Especially since everyone so far seems in character. So Susumu is going to follow up on Akesato...I hope she'll find some answers from him. Lol, Okita, the officer with long hair. We can just see it. ^^ Update soon, k? We're waiting eagerly! ^^ |
| Sahara 2005-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuse^o^ Good story! >w< I like! ^^;; I don't know if anyone told you this, demo, that black haired ninja (Miyae) is actually Susumu who was dressed up like a girl. |
| Ayuka Kathryn 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is really nice. Susumu and Akesato are my favorite PMK couple! The Alternate Universe makes it very interesting! Keep up the good work! |