Yea, i like the reveiw alot more, tho the first time was good too!

That was really sweet, I really like this oneshot.

Nice! _ i like the proposal part being elaborated _

awe.. no honeymoon? ) hihi.. niwae! you should start making a fluffy honeymoon night for the both of them! but no limes ok! just the fluff sweet whatever part ) so this story will remain free from any adult whatever thing .. niwae! goodjob! but id prefer less 'NARUTO' to make things more simpler.. aryt? well.. that's all.. more power! xoxo

aw so cute i lvoed it!

BOTH YOUR STORIES R SO AWESOME!

I love the revised version so much better than the original. They are both excellent though

i really loved it i wish this happened in the cartoon (crying)

I loved both of the version!

omg!

i loved that!and not just because Sasusaku was the pairing. It was VERY well writen. And i love when writers repeat the beggining at the end of the story. You did the charectors very well. You should be proud!:)

I liked the revised one better! yay! he proposed!

nice and cute huh! like it!

so sweet!

It was um... to tell you the truth, okay,okay, I'll tell you the truth, it was preety beutiful and romantic.

omg, i loved it! KYAA! _