Not oc at all, but what made me happy was that you chose that version of the little mermaid. There is another one where in the end the little mermaid dies! Isnt that so sad?!

amazingly written :D

your stories are freakin addicting! gezz, fourth one in not even fifteen minutes!

that was so cute! and great in-dept analysis of Disney fairy tales and its comparison to NaruHina. definitely a favorite.

This is reaally cute^^ I love it!

AW! How Cute! Ah that was so ADORABLE I almost cried tears of cuteness (or something like that). Write more! PLEASE! This is good!Please write more
Arigatou~

i think ur awesome keep up the good work!

I WANT A FAIRYTALE :( IT WAS CUTE THOUGH

Great story! If only Naruto wasn't so dense and oblivious to Hinata's feelings towards him in the anime and manga...>< This pairing is the cutest ever! ^^

It was good but the whole story was about Hinita compairing her and Naruto to a bunch of fairy tails. But it was still good.

So cute! Loved it!^^

so cute and sweet

it was a great story you should write this couple more often

cool, like how you'd tied different fairytales with Hinata and Naruto! Cute!

Aww, I don't think it's dull. I loved the contrast to the Little Mermaid; that was well-thought-out.

She's so quietly cute :)