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Lunaria Hyperion 2/5/06 . chapter 1
I feel bad for Xellos he's in so much turmoil, but there's always the hope that he's wrong and Lina cares too. I love Xellos/Lina pairings. Write more!
yili 2/12/04 . chapter 1
it's one of the best x/l fic i have ever read!
how sad it is ,i must say, when at last xel resisted his temptation to touch lina's face gently. i nearly cried when i read to this!
Cheska 3/31/03 . chapter 1
*teary eyed* I don't know if I've read this before but I couldn't help but review. If I've reviewed before and reviewed again, who cares? Because I just gotta say that it really touched me deeply when I read this. That small little question of hers, and his painful reply... *sigh* ;-;
MysteryLady-Tx 2/1/03 . chapter 1
Man that was nice...and lina would probably be pissed off if she knew what he was assuming...LOL...thanks:D
Wacky Dragon 7/18/02 . chapter 1
What a kawaii story! I shall always be faithful Lina/Xelloss supporter! Hope you continue writing! There are so very few of Lina/Xel writers! _ keep up the great work!
Kanshisha Tenshi 5/11/02 . chapter 1
That's too sad...;_;
RavenTears 2/24/02 . chapter 1
Kawaii!
Purin-chan 1/21/02 . chapter 1
Yay! Encore encore! ::sighs:: Kirei na...
CrimsonFire 12/27/01 . chapter 1
Aw that was so sweet and sad! XELLOS AND LINA 4EVER! *Sniffle* Great work ... I really liked that! CrimsonFire
Punkishbrat 12/9/01 . chapter 1
Please finish, make a chapter two...pllllllease!pllllease oh please!oh please!
Anakara 12/6/01 . chapter 1
that was SO good! You're a great writer!
terminal insanity 12/5/01 . chapter 1
that was... SAAADDD! will you be writing a sequel to this anytime soon? please do... and even if you don't, this story's good all by itself. and xel ain't ooc.
Rivenchu 11/8/01 . chapter 1
To sad *cries* but it was good I like it a lot *cries more*
Shadowdancer 9/16/01 . chapter 1
*sniffle* How sad!
Whisper 8/26/01 . chapter 1
Well, I didn't find it too angsty. I thought you just kept it real, that's all. All these fics where Xel is so mushy... Good stories are imperfect, in my opinion. The characters have to have problems, or else people have trouble believing them. Xel's problem makes sense for his character. Also, I like the way nothing really freaky happened, like a spur of the moment hot sex thing some people write. That's just crap. The smallest things can be the greatest. All in all, good story, but the songfic thing doesn't really sit too well with me, but maybe that's just me. Thanks for writing!
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