haha funny chapter update soon!

That was really good! Please update soon!

Good start, i looking foward too see where your going with this.

Hey! Its great to read something from you again! It really is. There needs to be some more RM on this her fanfiction, site. So thanks a lot for coming up with one. And yours are always so good.
First of all, great details with everything. Seth hearing that familiar noise, stepping back...Marissa sharing eye contact with Ryan...Sandy feeling the nervous eyes on him... Kirsten letting Ryan stay in the poolhouse. Great start so far. So once again, thanks a whole lot. I'm sure this will be a good one. And with RM, I suppose?? :^)

I can definitely see this going somewhere. Interesting take on how you think RM first see each other. It's got lot of potential.