hi! that was a nice one! please please update soon! i really want to know what would happen next! Chow!

WOW! this is gettin' good! keep up the great work!

try to review soon,k?

Ja Ne,

yer local manslayer

This is interestingly good.

- i like it! hayaku!hayaku! write more!

This is just twisted! Now hurry up and write more. I want to find out what happens next!

It's a vry nice story. But as you may see, I'm dying to read some more. You can't ossibly leave it like that. Be a good author and finish the story, OK? u

Great story! Please write more! I really want to know how this will end.

Eee! Nuriko's cracked! :P It's interesting viewing one of my favorite characters like this... the bay guy... o.O. I love it! Original and detailed. Please keep writing.

*eyes sparkle* This looks great! Nuriko... hehehehe... :)