It's a shame that you haven't continued this,

I was looking forward to more.

More Please Very Good! Nya!:3

Wow, I'm surprised someone else had the idea to have a challenge match between St. Hebereke and Maron's Rhythmic Gymnastics club. I was planning to do the same in one of my timelines... although Maron isn't going to be trained by Ranma in my story.

Thanks for this bit of amusement!

Quizer

good start to seems to be shaping into a great story! it would really really help if you put spaces in your writing XD. some slow people like me just need that kind of stuff. but otherwise tis great! and i love how you got ranma in it!

update soon!

great writes:D

_chocolate waffle-san

U-Silly-Small-Brained-Paperthin-Parody-Of-An-Author! Update!
It should be forbidden by law to let ANYONE make one *hell of a first chapter*, without updating!
*Grumble*
Applejack.

*StaresAtthePage. Again!*
Hey, am i *Incredible* unpatient, or are you just slow?
- Or with other words: WHY HAVENT U UPDATED YET? Please, give me a reason!
Anything! please. cant wait anymore...
this is too much... cant take it...
*LaysHeadAgaintsTheScreen&Wheeps*
*SOB* please update.
Applejack.

*ARGH*!
YOU!
DIDENT I TELL U TO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER?
GET YOUR SORRY-ASS GOING, OR IVE MIGHT COME AND *KICK*-START IT!
DAMN, UR LAZY!
*GLARES* Applejack. - Gram. DK. The World.

*StaringAtthePage*
AARGH! Only one chapter?
Get your lazy butt going and make another chapter! IWANNAREADMORE! WAHH!
**
please make another chapter?

Aiee! You must get to the training session! MUST! I just read Pawns (and am eagerly awaiting that too, it seems) and now i must wait for yet another story. O! What a wold! *grabs a giant notebook out of a draw, filps it open to about threaa quarters of the way through and scrawls something down. Closes the notebook, revealing it's heading : Stories i have to read.*

ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGg...update! _

Wow! Very nice! I like it a lot, and can't wait for more! The training sessions with Ranma and Maron ought to be interesting..._

I like! Please write more! You had everyone's speech and mannerisms pretty down pat, as far as I can see... Kodachi vs. Maron-this is going to be great!

Write more! That was, I don't know, kind of veered of from the original course - but, then it's cross over. I want to see more!

PLEASE write more! I really think this is a cool idea. _

this is a cool & great story but write the second part