ok, now you've completely shredded my heart. it was a good story, though a little lacking in a plot and point, but still good. and it was still emotion-shooting.
have you experienced things like this? im sorry if you have. i havent had too many deaths in my family, only two, but i have had a lot of heartbreak otherwise. i really like your stories- i hope you'll keep writing them. :)

Kiba

This isn't about the Fearless series.

Fearless is a common name among books, so you might be confused, but this thread is for the Fearless series, by Francine Pascal, a seventeen girl, born without fear, lives life as a trained agent, able to flip criminals four times her weight, without breaking a sweat.

This story also belongs in not here.

Not bad. Pretty sad, but that was what you were going for, right? Well, I like the part about God, so keep going! On thing of advice though? Put a space between paragraphs. It makes it easier to read. Read my storie on Eragon! An Outsiders Battle!