Allow me to say that this was an absolutely brillant story! Your plot, character developement and levels of angst were brought out amazingly. You did a great job of properly portraying all 6 of the Rangers as well as Sensei. I particularly loved the way in which you added action and fight scene (and better yet, the occassional Zord Battle).

You managed to make it feel remanicant of a true Power Ranger's episode, but at the same time make it clear that it was anything but. It's a great balance.

I also particularly loved the relationship between Cam and Hunter. They're such opposites and yet they have a great connection.

And of course, Cam was just awsome. Particulalry when he hung up on the drug-lord. While it was dangerous, it was smart of Cam too. It made certain that HE was the one to set the ground rules, not the Drug-lord.

I'm rather disapointed that the story is over. I actually sat there at the end wanting more.

A great story. You should be proud.

phoenix83ad

I gotta hand it to you, you've got all the rangers' characters down pat. Your take on Hunter-Blake banter is simply amazing, and your Hunter-Cam pairing is the best I've seen. I'm particulary impressed by how you use a regular human enemy this time, and made it so blend it so believably with the Power Rangers; while giving due respect to both sides so as the drug lord is not superweak to be kicked by the Power Rangers in a very believable way.

Your fics are an addicting thing to read, and in this case, you can't get too much of a good thing. Keep writing yeah.

What an awesome story! It had just the right amount of angst and mush and action. And I loved the ending.

Okay, gotta say this, geology geek mode has been activated: once you get more than about 30 ft below ground, the temperature typically stays at about 60 degrees F. Then decreases at a steady rate (have to look it up) from there. In any case, the caves should be staying at a steady temperature (barring drafts) summer and winter.

Geology geek mode deactivated. And feel free to ignore it. I certainly intend to 'cause I really like the pj's! Excellent story, looking forward to Deception.

Excellent job, from the humor of Cam's sleepiness and the video game, to the wrapup of Jared's situation, and of course to the very sweet, warm, funny, and endearing last scene. Another wonderful story from you!

Aw wow. So cute and amazing and wonderful and snuggley and aw! I feel all warm and cuddley now! Thank you!! What a brilliant ending to a great story! I loved the way you left Hunter's thoughts at the end - together and in love but not everything is neatly wrapped up (like the pressies!!). The flannel pj's... *snickers* Great job and look forward to reading more from you soon!

Excellent. I've loved theseries and if I could write like this I would be extremely proud of myself. You write vividly with great detail to the plot and keep it in character throughout. Excellent.

Aww... happy ending! Just the way I like it. :)

Oh, wow. Really cool ending and well written story over all. enjoyed the story line. Very unique. LOVED it. Can't wait for your new story.

Excellent story. I am glad that everything worked out for all of them. Please write soon.

*giggle* I've been wondering how long it would take for Hunter to make it from the console to Cam's bed. And the image with the pajamas is just hilarious.

Fitting ending for this story.

Cheers & See You Around,

Hagar

Excellent finale my friend, really worked excellently and finished it off on the right note.

Great work, can't wait for more stuff from you.

Great story!! I think that you captured the essence of Hunter and Cam, not to mention the other rangers exactly!! As much as I miss the fact that we will never have any new Ninja Storm episodes on T.V., this story more than makes up for that. Please continue to write!!

I LOVE IT!!

That was just spectacular. The whole gang at OP's trying to take advantage of Cam's sleeping by playing video games on the computer was just funny. Cam thanking the guys was out of character in sense but still not if you get my drift. He doesn't open up much but ever now and again he shows he cares. Now this is a nice step ina good direction Cam and Hunter together even with the 'mushy idiot' mistletoe. This whole situation has made Hunter think even more about his future with Cam although we already know but if one recalls during Shades of Red Cam did give us a hint and Hunter a hint to how he cared.

Great story can't wait for Deception of the Samurai even though the title makes me wonder what you're going to do to the boys now.