That. Was Epic.

Thank you.

WHOO! GO ASLAN!! KICK SOME MARY SUES BUTT! YOU SO TOTALLY ROCK! WHOO! WHOO!! WHOO!

Have you ever heard of an organization called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum? If you like getting rid of Mary Sues so much, you should check them out. Here is a website that has a lot of information about them: http://ppc./wiki/PPC_Wiki.

now that was funny

ha ha ha...Not as funny as I thought it would be but I have to admit, the you are changed with having an idiotic name bit was kind of funny because of what happens with most mary-sues. In my spoof "How to save a Narnian fanfic" I had a mary-sue run in at the end. Maybe you could read it if you have some spare time.

oh, lilith? I thought that was also the name of Adam's first wife before Eve, she was evil. The book was later thrown out of the bible. my Women in Theology class read the summary of it last year. That's what I thought you were referencing. I forgot about the whole Jadis thing.

I say kill sir what's his name.

oh yeah, Princess Bride (best ever, book's all right). movie is from william goldman, original author was s. morgenstern.

you really should do a Suspian, or Lucian.

what are you talking about? That was absolutely hilarious! hehe! An umbrella. en garde! I'm seriously laughing on the other end of the computer right now!

hehe. I love. I haven't read too many narnia fics. I first checked it before the movies came out and didn't see much. Then I just checked it recently. I think I liked it better before the hype.

Please do one about Susan and Caspian! I thought the movie was cute with that ending and kind of shoot-me-in-the-face-i-can't-believe-they-just-did-that at the same time. I haven't found a single good "suspian". I hope you update this soon, because i think you have a lot of material to work with.

hehe, i really loved Authoress. Oh yeah, don't worry about being short, my best friend is 19 and 4'11".

I am SO glad though that I have effectively avoided the Peter Edmund 'Sues.

Keep up the awesome work! Seems like you have hundreds of adoring fans and your fic is "practically famous"!

What's with all the little lines in between paragraphs?

So frickin halarious!

Having finally seen the movie, I'm now looking forward to see some of needed S/C bashing in one of your next chapters as soon as you get through with it. May Aslan grant you inspiration!

This chapter, though it does bear some resemblance to the first, is still a delight to read.

--Lady Bracknell

I'm breaking my strict rule of laziness (i.e., not reviewing until I've read up to the latest chapter) to say: I didn't know 'l337' stood for 'elite'! Something new every day. :-}

Anyway, while I'm here, might as well review. I'm really enjoying the story thus far, though this chapter has all the classic earmarks of an "either too late or too early" piece—especially 'to' used for 'too'—though that might be intentional and I just missed the bus there. I'll keep reading and leave a much more comprehensive review later on.

“Enchantress ReallyPwettyHair, I charge you with knocking Edmund so far out of character he could not touch canon with a twenty-foot pole..."

Lol, I love it.

I hope this isn't some kind of sacrilige, but, # adds to alert#

L8R

-The All Real numbers Symbol

Luv the whole thing so much
Loadsa peeps probably sed that b4 but it IS so hoo cares?
Tis funny
Tis funny
Tis funny
Tis funny