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| Miharu Kawashi 2007-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseAww Megumi is smitten. Now if only she would admit it. *sigh* Cute story. Ja ne! |
| ^_^ 2006-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abusesano is an idiot. but really. thats why megumi likes him LOL |
| skenshingumi 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWhat can you say but very sweet. It was not over the top either which was nice. |
| unattainable 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseYay! I really like it. I'd say, 7/10? Its good! *cheers* |
| Deep Color 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Like you said, it's short and simple. I think, basically, you have a very good general idea for this drabble. My only concern is that there are grammar mishaps here and there from time to time. Your English is very much understandable, except on note of the aforementioned flaw. \o/ But, in all honesty, I liked this story. I liked the ending very much. The beginning parts were okay, but you could have done so many things with them, I actually lost count. But yeah, keep it short and simple, eh? Good job. :) |
| roosterboy 2006-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! I absolutely loved it! This is just...amazing! Keep writing fics like that! |
| Megumi 2006-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a great story, I really hope that you end up doing a sequel for it. |
| janey-in-a-bottle 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuse"... give him a hard time about it tonight at dinner" in front of EVERYBODY? Hehe, sounds like fun - for the others. Can't really decide, if I should laugh about that or feel sorry for him. ^^ Good job! |
| sanodevil 2006-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing!! I absolutely loved this story! |
| anaemicfaeries 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseAw! So cute! ^_^ |
| meg-chan 2006-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This is moving, touching, and beautiful all at once. |
| Lara 2006-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is really good. I really liked this. Written very nicely, and a very interesting style to write it in! It's beautiful... |
| sakuradancer3 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseOh...so swet! Please... could u write one more chapter? PLEASE? |
| SweetMisery49 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseaww that was soo cute. i loved it. great job |
| charmed-sword 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseHa ha, I absolutely adored this! 'Jewelry? Nah, women often got strange ideas after a guy gave them jewelry'lol! “Wha?” Sano took a step backwards. “Get away from me!” hahahaha! I can just see that! 'If any of his gambling buddies saw him now he would die. Or if they laughed too loud, then they would die.' *bursts into giggles* And I loved Megumi's reaction! Aw, they are just the cutest couple. Great fic! |