 Shadow Chakra 2006-03-12 . chapter 1AMY-CHAN! Found your account! ^_^. Gues who?! Yeah, It's Rikku-chan! Or PH...well whatever. Back to the story review...Man, this was really sweet. I love how one-shots always end with the title. Great job, man! ^_^ |
 Citric Point 2006-02-05 . chapter 1Aw, this was so sweet. I actually cried. It's so emotional. You captured Cloud's emotions and thoughts very well. Well written. Hope to see more Cleris from you! Hehe.
Lurve the momo. |
 mystic-Hoshi 2006-01-04 . chapter 1aw...that was sweet. =) |
 asga 2005-12-30 . chapter 1 aww sweet ne :P they loves each other a lot :P nice fanfic :D |
 CloudLove3r-In-Your-Face 2005-12-30 . chapter 1Then CloudLov3r cried aloud, "Oh, I loved that this crappy fanfic ended!
This sucked and it has a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.
You basically copied the dialog from the game and added a few "tears" and "I love you's" then called it a fanfic.
On top of that you made this crap a CXA. Which I sometimes find good ones here and there...but THIS SUCKED!
-Muah ha ha ah ah aha ha ha aha |