This is great, i love how you wrote this, it written really well, i like it alot. I love reading from Souta point of veiw for some reason, it just interesting to read about how he and the rest of Kagome feels about her time travel and worrying about whether or not she'll come back. once again written very well. GREAT JOB!

Sara:Megan are you feeling ok? Were you bored when you wrote this? No offense but it's pretty boring. Were you running out of story ideas? I don't mean to sound mean, but i hope you're going to do something interesting with this? I hope you are. Please don't kill me though. I'm just telling the truth.

Samara: If you write something this boring again, you will die in seven days!

aw this is so sad! it's really sweet too, you worded it just perfectly!

That made me really think. I think it actually made my eyes water...That's a good thing. It was pulling and sad. So here's my review... ;o;

i love this! there are no good souta stories out there. this is so good!