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Latona.Selene 4/12/09 . chapter 1
EPIC. WIN.

This is just, awesome, utterly freakin' awesomely hilarious. I tip my hat to you, ma'am, this was a wonderful piece of fiction.
kitsuneluvuh 3/22/09 . chapter 1
Brilliant! XD
Vaxl 12/17/07 . chapter 1
Haha! This is funny! A good way to show your hatred for Sues and fill in plot holes- With humor!

That's why you're cool, and this is why I'm trying my best to be an awesometasticiful fanfic writer! :D
Minorkae 11/26/07 . chapter 1
I like this. I can sometimes get into something without a descernable plot if it's funny enough. No, I do not consider 'hiking for to find me love' as a plot.

Hurrah for Suebashing!
Spirit Evolution 11/18/06 . chapter 1
Omg, I totally love you for this fic roflcopterz xD

Kthxzbai
MikoHatome 6/5/06 . chapter 1
Man, this proves that you're out to kill

every MarySue alive! At first I couldn't believe

the summary talking about the cliche of Youko and his

past love. But then I read PARODY. I laughed hard. _;;
Indecisive Mind 2/26/06 . chapter 1
Bwahahaha, "Speshul"! This was funny!
bookworm0492 2/17/06 . chapter 1
*blinks* is it over? *blinks* well, funny, kinda,lol, ok it IS funny, the mary-sue...haha...its great. tell me if it updates.
Envyluvr976 1/14/06 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHA, I love your writing you rock!
Lunalom 1/6/06 . chapter 1
Bwahahaw. Quite funny as always. I really like the name Speshul, though I have to admit my brain is being lazy and it took me a good minute to connect it to 'Special'. That, however, might have been because right after I read it, I had to go to the bathroom. Yup, the world stops for potty time. Hey, that's good, I have to remember that...
EternusLemures 1/4/06 . chapter 1
oh. my. god. that completely did NOT turn how I thought it would. Should have expected that, though, I guess. You always do seem to have a talented for the unpredictable. But god, I honestly don't think I could have made a more "Mary-Sue-Award" worthy character.This fic actually had me staring at the computer for roughly a minute wondering what-the-fing-hell? I love it!

EL
Accidental.Enlightenment 12/31/05 . chapter 1
xD Can't stop laughing at the idea. Yep, dirt is evil. Especially when it's the ashes of a Mary-Sue. Loved how Seunui made an appearance. The man's hardly ever mentioned in fics.

And as a reply to your review reply from the last time I reviewed: Yes, it does suck. . This why I chose this name. Used to be Fate's Child, Destiny's Friend, but suddenly I had the urge to change it. I feel rather less childish now.

Accidental.Enlightenment.
tigerhw114 12/30/05 . chapter 1
Well, this is definitely not what I expected when your name showed up in my e-mail box. Not that I knew what to expect. Well written, and hilarious.
hikomokushi 12/30/05 . chapter 1
Yet another ingenious way to kill those dreaded Mary Sues. "Her perfectly sexy body had no scar." Love this statement. Because really, it's an easy way to take away from the Mary Sue-ness of a fic if you just give the Mary Sue an even semi-disfiguring scar. Not a huge "oh, my father raped me and slashed me!" scar, but just a "me and my friends were goofing off and I tripped and hit a rock, thus I have a scar on my cheek" type of thing.

*bows* I have found yet another incredibly horrible HieiOC/KuramaOC Mary Sue fic. Read "Kiss of the Rose" by Anime-fangirl1. You can tell it all by her name, man. "Fangirl". No serious female anime extremist would call themselves a 'fan girl'. *shakes head* Also! I'm currently writing up a 'Kill the Mary-Sue' fic. I think it's going to be very funny.
A lilmatchgirl 12/30/05 . chapter 1
Hehehehehehehe. Speshul, indeed. XD Why peonies though? One would have thought it to be roses. Ah, well, she is... um, *was* speshul, after all. :p

...and hey! *pokes you* Update WANGST soon - I can't wait for more of your Sue-in-training. XD
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