|Reviews for Another Dimention|
| delete delete does not compute 6/27/06 . chapter 1
Very nice to see everything spelled correctly, but I know that a bit more editing may be needed, my friend. If you'd like, I can edit it for you. (The only thing it really needs are commas in the right place, etcetera.)
If it does get a bit more cleaned up, I'd like to add it to my C2 Community for the Zack Files and probably make you a staff member!
A very promising start to a good story! Please continue?
| JLE 1/4/06 . chapter 1
WRITE MORE ITS A GOOD STORY PUT CAM AND GWEN TOGETHER THEY ARE A REALLY GOOD COUPLE PLEASE PUT THEM TOGETHER WRITE MORE
| jake l epstien 1/4/06 . chapter 1
this story if really cool please write more