cool story

still good.

Please finish the story!

I'm being a but and not signing in so please deal. Anyways excellent story! Please keep writing!

very interesting story. kind of surprised me the way you dropped it from "The Forgotten". then picked it right up with this one. all in all i think it is good... _

i love your story. i can't wait to read what's going to happen next.

U bet I have, what took so long? When did Neptune get captured cuz I don't remember that. When we talk next you'll have to remind me. Post another chapter, what is this? You need to post more often or you loose peeps. Can't wait for more TTYL! Miko

Update soon or else...I can't do anything about it. Please continue asap!

can't wait for the rest.

yea! you continued it!

very interesting! Can't wait to see what's going on with this mysterious stranger! Please post more soon!

I think it's sad you have so little reviews for such a great story. You shouldn't worry about how many people review though, I would like you to keep going. Please?

Very interesting! Who are all the new people and what's going to happen? I can't wait to see what happens next!