wow! that was so sad and brilliant. you are one talanted writer!!

wow! That was so powerful and moving. It was also so true to life, people don't always just cry then move on, the mourning process hits us in different ways, and you've captured that so vividly here. Please continue this story, I'd love to know what happens!

Ahh, poor John, having to deal with losing his only older brother and his fueding family. 'Till part two!:DBye!

WOW! What a powerful story!

That was just...wow! Looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm old enough to remember the original TV series and 'fell in love' with Scott when I was 12. Your heart-breaking story brought it all back to me. What a talented writer you are. I particularly like the fact you have maintained the characters of the brothers as I remember them. I look forward eagerly to the next chapter.

Great work except now I have to go wash the tear streaks from my face before I go to work. I feel so bad for Gordon and Virgil. It's evident that they're taking this the hardest.