Dark-ish. I suppose that's a good thing, as too much fluff can rot your brain. I liked it, though somehow not as much as the other things you've written.

I love it! I love your letter. I am still pondering on how the mother got sick. Hm...interesting.

I wonder what happened to the father. He must have done _something_ (have a hint of what it might be). Is he dead perhaps?

Well, wonderous letter. I would feel heartbroken (if only I was younger). Sorry for your losses Edward Elric! T_T

(silence: in memory of Ed and Al's mother)

Soularia Reed

Aww that was so touching. Poor Ed *huggles the Ed* Very nice job at this!

Wow, that really sounds like Edward.

You're one of the best authors I've found so far who's really given the anger Ed feels towards his father a voice.

Thank you.