I don't know how to put what I'm feeling right now into the words. Because this is too much, really. You guys are definitely talented, more than just talented, gifted and the whole thing is more original than anything - it does not repeat itself all the time and that's something that intrigues me. I especially liked the wolf metaphor.

For goodness, how did you manage to write this beautifully, this poetically, this...

Well, I wasn't kidding when I said I didn't know how to put my thoughts into words. Because I really can't express it, or perhaps that's what I think.

Nonetheless, your story is just too damn perfect. I absolutely adore it - and the pairing left me breathless. I swear, I've never wanted to be Hermione this much, even when I read HGxTMR stories and I'm a Tom Riddle fan through and through! Oh my... I'll read the rest of your stories when I have time. Please continue this, it's too good - it's just bloody wonderful to stay discontinued.

Please take my begging into consideration: I know that you need two months and all - I couldn't continue my story for months and still can't, I'm busier than I could have ever imagined in my worst nightmares. So I understand that you need time, you have your own respectable lives. Still, I'd be glad - more than just damn glad, I'd be dying from the bloody happiness from reading such a great story - if you updated as soon as you can. You will, right? Right?

Pardon my cussing but I couldn't stop myself.

your awed reader
nyxiee

P.S: I'd like to post a better review, perhaps one with constructive criticism, but I'm afraid I'm too sleepy for that.

I love the whole thing, but why are you guys not updating? :( ;(

ArtemisxHermione? I never thought about it before, but that is a BRILLIANT pairing. They're both so unbelievably clever, and Artemis is a LOT like a youngLord Voldemort. Hm. Never realized.
Your writing is brilliant, and I like just reading and rereading the parts where you describe things, just because its like poetry and it paints a picture worthy of Monet.
Update as soon as possible, I can't wait to see where this is going.
By the way... The Rapunzel Complex? It sounds really good, but I don't actually understand what it means. Or will that be explained later?

Cat. x

I love this story! You should write more!

Wow...Hermoine in this story seems to think That just 'cause she's got a genius level IQ, she's different from some regular schmuck on the street. Bragging here-- scored in the 99Th percentile in all my tests, that doesn't mean I automatically succeed at everything I try. Smarts mater in terms of comprehension and understanding, but the utility of straight smarts decreases exponentially compared to how abstract the task is. I understand all the principles and all the history behind the internal combustion engine, but if my transmission dropped, then I'd still have to call a mechanic. It's be really cool if Hermione got a wake up call at some point in this story.

please continue i hate it when people start good stories and then just abandon then just as it is finishing.

That was intersesting I hope you update soon

I love your plotline, and the centaur history was both creative and interesting. Its also an interesting and unique take on Hermiones character without changing her personality all that much. I hope your update soon!

I am in awe of your writing, and do hope that you will continue writing.

I really like this story, and I like how you keep Artemis as the genius among genii, since that's what he is. Even if Hermione's smart, she's not a genius; it's obvious in the books. Anyway, good job.

Probably the only Artemis Fowl crossover story I'll ever fav. If I could write half as well as you... actually, I /can/ write half as well as you. And I'm fifteen. *sigh* Ah well. There will always be greater and lesser people, and while it's a shame I'm under the 'lesser' category in your case, I can at least comfort myself by reading your stories and being glad there are good authors out there.

I've been keeping track of this story since... I think... last year, and I'm still keeping an eye on it now. Only, this time I actually have an account to watch over it from.

So. I'll just wait for your next update, eh?

Weird. Very weird. Aren't you being a tad harsh on Harry & Ron?

fantastic. keep it up please.

You mentioned that you would like your readers to point out typos- look for "nshe", in context here:

Not Artemis, not a wolf—but danger, sweet danger that takes me even now?

She clutched her wand. It was slick with sweat. She had never been so afraid as ~nshe~ was now, so alone, and the glade just kept brightening with that damnable light, and despite it all, she found herself in a mad ecstasy. This was who she was, not someone atrophied by books—

Is my love of danger the cause of my infatuation?

Hey,

I just found this story and I'm really enjoying it so far. Please update soon!