just so you know...

i have a HUGE grin on.

this was great.

i absolutely LOVED it.

man you are such a good writer.

care to share your talents?

o0o0o intruige.

aww nice story!

aww that was pretty cute. definitely better than the actual episode. great job!

aw i have to say i love this story! its great and sweet and i love it! you got a talent there! dont let it go to waste! write another! :D

Ooh, take charge Lorelai. Touchy subject when it comes to Luke, but you pulled it off quite masterfully. Can't wait for next installment!

so is it over now? the top said complete...just wonderin-i like it!

Aww I loved it! Very cute! :)

That was so great! I loved it. The way you wrote Luke and Lorelai was very realistic. Seriously though, this is such an awesome story. Please write some more LL stories! Great job!

awesome! I love it its genious. If this is really just a two part then you should wrtie a sequal!

omg! GREAT update soon!

Thaks for pm-ing me with the update, cause I forgot to save it as a favorite.

Wow. Really, really excellent. I can toally see Lorelai doing all this- the freaking out, the staring, the just kissing him, the straddling him (btw, I love you for that, lol)

(Serious face) but I hate Rory :pout:

The hottness was awesome, but this was my favorite part-

“No problem.” He said. “You think she’ll get out again tonight?” He asked her.

She sat down at the counter, and smiled. “Yeah, I think she might.”

Awesome.

oh i'm curios now! update asap

loved it

That was great! (L)