It's always scared me about how there's such a thin line between dreams and reality, like how you can feel pain in dreams.

totally
fricken
amazing

this is such an amazing story...

great story

Impressive, to say the least.

wow, that was amazing. litterally the best story i have ever read. much better than the show. i hope we can expect some drawings of Chaos on your deviantART.

how on earth are you such a good writer?

that was so cool! i loved reading it, and thank you!^_^

~Smells like Rain...

I love chaos. I relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay relay LOVE chaos. She is just so cool! I love how she is raven's adopted mother. I love you for writeing such cool storys about raven and star getting together and haveing chaos there as well.

ravens moms name is arella

Amazing! I am so very pleased I finished the story! Wow! I am definately going to re-read this again. :chuckles: I had to spread the reading over 3 days as it was to properly enjoy it. I love the retelling of the last few episodes too. Very nice touches!

Congrats! ^_^

Your rendition of "Birthmark" and "The End" were so much better than the original show; not only due to the fact that Raven and Starfire are together as a couple and that it is filled with violence not fit for children's reading pleasure, but also because of your own genius in creating Chaos's outstanding and memorable character.

Wow... great ending, I didn't expected to have Terra back with us... but anyways is so cool! Great ending for "The End" I like it... are we going to see a next part please?

*claps wildly and cheers* Fantastic end!! *coughcoughwriteanotherpartcoughcough*
Thank you so much for gracing us with this story!
RPX

ALL RIGHT! Great ending. It was great. I llike the character Chaos a lot. Nice development. You should definately think about a sequel.

ahh. sweet ending. I was wondering what happen to Terra and how come she wasn't around when they were fighting Trigon's goonies. Nice job interweaving your own plot/characters with the End episodes. Very nice.