great story, i enjoyed it much.

Certainly one of the most orignal and longest fan fiction I've read. There are no words that can describe how much i enjoyed that story, but I can try: OMIGODTHATWASSOAMAZINGLYFANTASTICLYSUPERBLYAWESOME!

Knight Of Exodar
;D

I wonder who you based General Chrugen on? sounds a bit like a certain confederacy commander to me

Knight-Of-Exodar
:D

WOW! I'm just about speechless. And you know what? it is very very difficult to catch my attencion with a story this long. the longest story i ever read was Caption Kodak1's "The Lotas Bloom". Very GOOD!


The pup is out yo.

Woof,Woof

this story is awsome it really touched me i think u should do an extended chapter where it tells u about kim and Ron a year later and how Drakken and Bonnie form revenge!

best story of KP i've ever read. great job :D

Great ending, with K/R getting hitched.
For them realizing the violence has to stop somewhere or will continue to grow.

Interesting way of offing Shego and ending Drakken.

Thanks for the time and effort with this and for the ride as well.

Hey, thanks a lot for the mention! And you're welcome; when a story is as good as this one, I stick to it no matter how much it takes to be finished.

Great final chapter. The exchanges were quite good, and so the fight scenes. I particularly liked the hostage situation with James, Drakken and Kim.

Keep the good writing.

Good job with this tale. Kim & Ron realized their methods were extreme and learned they had to dial them back to save their humanity and souls. The bad guys got or will get their deserved punishments, but somehow may come back to strike again, maybe?

Now Kim & Ron have learned of their affections for each other at the end of the war and now are engaged as Ron goes off for an education in Europe. Kim's home for college but has a ring to bind her to her friend for life. Her family saw this coming after they observed the results of, and took part in, separating those two and restraining them from their work as Team Possible. They did learn the folly of this and the lesson of doing such a thing.

Later!

CB73

Awesome. Simply excellent, I enjoyed it very much.

Wonderful job! Very intense chapter, especially the whole Kim vs Ron-Bonnie stuff.

Keep the good writing.

High drama up on that wall for Kim & Ron, especially Kim. So it looks like he & Bonnie may make it; Ron will still sacrifice himself for another, even though she was using him to break Kim. Should be interesting when Kyle gets to them.

Kim now thinks she has really lost her 'heart' when Ron fell, but I hope she soon learns otherwise. Then there is Drakken using her dad for bait to smoke her out for a final confrontation.

See ya soon!

CB73

Great chapter. Kims fight against Ron. Her tossing Bonnie out of the smashed wall.
Looks like Ron and Bonnie have managed to survive...for the moment.
Another good cliffhanger, this time with Kim's dad being threatened by Drakken...to be used as bait against his own daughter.

Excellent chapter! Very emotive, with a great cliffhanger.

Keep the good writing.

Great story and what a cliffhanger you've left us on.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.