 sky's girl forever 2006-02-08 . chapter 15 know that was a sweet way to end it. Can't wait for what you wright next. |
 koulagirl32 2006-02-08 . chapter 15:) Perfect ending, especially bringing the earthquake back to the fore.
Will miss your stories, they have been awesome. Thank you. |
 koulagirl32 2006-01-27 . chapter 13it seems strangely right that teresa should be the voice of reason at the end.
you made me cry... hmm. |
 koulagirl32 2006-01-22 . chapter 11oh nice. progress!! yippee!! i love how you took us through the command centre... it adds to the depth of the rangers, and explains some of the earlier comments from the rangers.
i also liked the way that even though the link was made rather clear for teresa, it took collaboration to work through the rest of the theory.
it will be interesting to see how brendan goes with ian's dad... |
 koulagirl32 2006-01-15 . chapter 8*giggles* i've been lax reviewing; i'm so sorry... you're just too excellent for words.
that is just funny!! he. well done!! the rangers need something to keep same while fury is on the loose. |
 koulagirl32 2006-01-04 . chapter 3you know, if the power ranger thing doesn't work out you could always make a career out of writing full-time.
:) we don't see all the rangers yet their reactions to the events of chapter one are really well described, i think... a reminder of how human they really are. and, yi... bodies burnt at the stake. witches?? |
 sky's girl forever 2006-01-02 . chapter 2 Can't get a enought of these's. Update soon. |
 koulagirl32 2006-01-02 . chapter 2yessir. :)
Interlude is a good way to get an outsider's perspective as well as put the events in context without going back to the Command Centre, a fitting advance from Zordon's admission in the last story. :) |
 koulagirl32 2005-12-31 . chapter 1eighth and final? best? damn, you can't just stop when things are improving!! well, you can, and i actually applaud you for being able to back away but damn...
i love this already. it's so real, and close to home. the action is happening on the planet, yeah? it feels real... reminds us that the fight never stops, anywhere...
your writing in the first few paragraphs is amazing, showing a depth of world and personality to give context to the regular stuff with the rangers later on. :) |