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| bookthehobbit 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseXD that was great. completly in character. Poor Willy Wonka having that dreadful Salt Woman look at him like that. *shudders* she is a dreadful person lol. that was so great. |
| Mari 2006-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuselol aw this is adorable(sp?) i like i thought it was very cute ^-^ |
| Isayssoccer 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseSo Willy thinks girls are 'icky'? That's because he hasn't met me yet...! *Maniacle laughter* Great job! You did really good at keeping everyone, especially Willy, in character. |
| Poppy Cotton 2006-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHahahahaha! this was brilliant! |
| AchillesMonkey 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Icky and cooties. As a girl, I take a little bit of offense to that, but it's making me remember how much fun it was to torture the boys back when I was little by smiling or chasing them around the playground. *evil grin* Great job. |
| Belle07 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWhy don't you write a sequel to this one. Maybe he meets someone who worth his love. The first part is really good. |
| Umino Akiko 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuse*glares at Wonka* I am NOT icky! And I don't like you saying that I am! Good story though! Very true to Willy's presonallity! |
| sparrowed 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseOMG even though that was short I was laughing all the way thru it, almost crying! So so so funny, I loved that scene in the movie too! I was gonna write a fic like this too, but Willy Wonka is talking about it Jack Sparrow...yeah, crossover You should made it longer! Ah! lmao |
| Daemon faerie queen 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! Absolutely fantastic. I don't really want to complain about the need to put different people's speech on separate paragraphs so sorry, but I absolutely flipping love this oneshot. You got the character perfectly. *Hands you a Wonka bar* |
| just jacs 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseha ha ha i liked this!! you kept Wonka very in character great fic! |
| Luminouslollie 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEW! lol, I'm just kidding. That was quite cute. :) |
| 2D 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very amusing story... write more like it! |
| Actress020306 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abusehm...cute story |