Loved this 1 another great 1 and I love how u ended the story the way u started it very creative

YES!YES!YEES! team Possible is Back! WHOOHOO! one question though. after Ron saved everyone from nine foot tall aliens and took the mantle of the monkey master, why did Kim think he wasnt good enough? huh chef Ron, that makes sense but i dont think Kim would ever be in GJ she'd make her own orginazation (i spelled that wrong.) i loved this story and was cheering when they got back together, the universe is now back in balance. -.-

-Kaitlyn

I can really see this happening, and though it may seem a bit harsh i really don't think Kim would deserve Ron after she dumped him for an upgrade or 20... Nice story though, loved the giant squirrel rofl

Love the story, awesome for a short one, wish it was more large and that you would had went more deep into kims and Rons past after they broke up

ps.- I dont know english hope its clear

AWESOME story, but too bad it's a little too short. also as strange as it might sound, i'm actually curious about what happen to Adam after kim 'dumped' him.

Sweet...I knew they'll be back together. I was surprise that Shego will do something noble. I guess it was the night, or lights, or her conscience...who knows, but I'm glad things went well.

Danny

I don't know about everyone else but the word "King Kong" is dancing on my head. Funny and weird at the same time. I'm just glad that Ron got KP's back.

Danny

Sad beginning. Really sad. At least there seem to be some hope.

Danny

MrDrP,

Nice throwback reference to the first chapter...the treehouse, the Kimmunicator showing the celebration, and the little box. It gives the piece a "full circle" feel to it that just feels right.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

PS: I would try your Epic story arc, but I probably will have to clear a full weekend for that first. :*)

Holy King Kong, Batman!

Of all the break-up/make-up scenarios I have read by so many writers on this site, at least *this* one keeps all the main players "in character". Kudos to you, once again!

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

this story is great, i am having fun reading it, but the only problem is my youngest sister, she has this website, every second she sees me doing something, she puts it in the website and everybody can see it, so i'm trying hard to finsh reading this story before she sees my.( isnt that like what happenes to KP from the Tweebs, strang!)

Thanks,

cya,

Laura Rogers.

hi

i luv all of your stories, and i read most of them.

but at this story when i began reading and found out that KP is not with ron i was very angry until i finshed the chapter, its a great twist.

so please keep going with those fantastic stories if yours.

Thanks,

cya,

Laura Rogers.

great story, i enjoyed it.

Im sorry MrDrP but you ruined a potentionally great ending by giving in to mushy romance. From everything you wrote, the breakup, the years apart, the understaning that Kim and Ron aquired from it and the discovery that they still cared deeply for one another, yet you didn't allow them to progress. Just threw them back into the same sitch they began with. Sure Kim now sees him as more of a partner than a sidekick and realizes while he's not the perfect guy (lol how shallow can she be) he's the perfect guy for her. Yet you could have had them come to accept their own and each others limitations. Kim's a natural born GJ agent, while Ron's gifts recide elsewhere, in this case, a career as a gourmet chef. They can still love each other without becoming Team Stoppable again. Cause thats what true "love" is: hard work, patience, acceptance, and a lot of pain. You gave into the mushy fantasy ending. When there was so more potential. Oh well, I liked it, just not the ending. Thanks for sharing. Till next time..adios.

That was a great possibly AU story that focuses on the major faults of the main characters' personalities - Kim's social climbing and Ron's low self-esteem. Yet, in the end, all the two of them end up doing is realising that they are trying to find a replacement for the very person who they have convinced themselves isn't the right one.

The ending with the King Squirrel on the ESB was hillarious. I was wondering whether GJ's hoverjets were going to finish the game but fortunately Shego was there to save the day. Live on national TV. She is /not/ going to be able to live that one down quickly, is she?

I love how Zorpox still makes Shego tremble. ;-)

Overall, this was a fine work.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10