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| Ilona 2006-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery beautiful. |
| Joosie 2006-03-21 ch 1,  | abusebeautifully written |
| twin*muse 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseoh that's so cool! I love that about the painting! It's brilliant! I love this..you do Luby very well...thanks to discovering Faith to discovering you in the fave authors...now added to MY list! SOO gonna read your next Luby stuff! Colly E. of twin*muse |
| exploradora 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseVERY cute fic! Great job and I can't wait to read your next work of luby greatness! |
| Becky 2006-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseLJ...Way to convert Becky into a Luby ;) Excellent. :) I liked the painting idea, especially. |
| Rosa 2006-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think it is very sweet. |
| justawritier 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseaww.cute.Have a great new year too. |
| Dragonfly Faith 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI love you! this was lovely honey! I'm so proud I turned you, I knew only good things could come out of it! so I finished it, where's my prize? also, I feel souper important! thnx heaps for writing this! |
| pounamou 2005-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abusenot bad at all... interesting plot. one thing: you can't use water to clean oil paint (unless you're using a rather new kind of water soluble oil paint). hope to read you here again soon ... and happy new year |
| Lisnaskea 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome, nice work! It makes me wish I had a hot Croation to spend New Years with now :( Anyways, Happy New Year! |
| anonymous01 2005-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe middle of CSI fics is a good place to be, but I'm glad you took the time to write this. Your S12 New Year's is markedly different from the one we've been given here in the US, but your difference is refreshing. You've written this well, incorporating many ideas I haven't seen before (the painting! And here I was expecting one of the girls to be Jasna and you surprised me there, too!), but there is one thing that you need to work on: verb tenses. You change from past to present frequently (I'm not talking about the flashback section), but other than that it was excellent! Keep working on your multi-chap; I'll be looking forward to it! |
| LLF 2005-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! How cool to bring in the paint thing! Good job. |